|Reviews for trouble though he may be|
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/9
I loved how you slipped in lines - I didn't even notice before I memorized my lines. On the second read through after the show I noticed. Nice and smooth, not roughly shoved in your face. I don't know if you were going for this but it's also super depressing. I can't tell how but this is really good writing.
| FiveSecondsOfCrazy chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
This was an unusual story (in a good way). I like how you took the characters and adapting their personas and names onto the characters they portray. The comment at the end about Nathon made me smile. :)
| Ice-Eagle Y'siri chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Brilliantly done. Feel free to branch out more often! Thank you for writing this! So often only the happy side of showbiz is written, but not the more realistic and negative aspects. Good job! :)