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Revliledpembroke chapter 6 . 1/23
And now the big question...forgotten, abandoned, or just busy? Hmmmmm...also, if you have any proofreaders, you may want to fire them. I spotted a few there/their/they're and your/you're issues, along with a surprising where/were (considering the first is pronounced whair and the second is werrr, just saying them would tell you which goes where). Also, Hedwig was not in morning for Harry. She should have been mourning. And you said something about someone needing a brake. That's great and all, but that's how you spell car brakes, not spring break. That's about all I can remember... wrote soon!
Chae-lo chapter 6 . 12/16/2015
Please UPDATE! I love this story!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2015
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nayin17 chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
Interesting start...I wish you own HP so there's loads of Ginny exposure in canon
squirtlee16 chapter 6 . 8/13/2014
I like the story :)
Lilykees chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Please Please continue this story. It is really good and I would love to follow it to the end.
nightwing27 chapter 3 . 2/19/2014
harry and ginny pairing rocks who cares what j.k rowling is saying now but she made the right choice
willam and jack and jake chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
nice can't wait to read more
willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 2/2/2014
snape won't stay like that for long
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
nice very cool
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 2/2/2014
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
nice very well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
cool
tuxjim chapter 6 . 12/20/2013
I was going to add some additional comments about the story, but it's too late and I'm too tired.

I WILL, however, express my hope that your computer troubles disappear like the mist on Black Lake after the sun rises far enough, and that you can turn out more chapters. PLEASE! This story deserves finishing, and I wish I had the talent to do so, but I am well aware of my own writing talents (small and fairly meager, I will admit willingly) and so will NOT make a fool of myself and volunteer to try, or even to help; although, if you were to need an "extra" pair of eyes to do beta reading, I would gladly do so. I DID notice some 'incorrectly' used homonyms in the last posted chapter, as well as some grammatically 'awkward' phrases and sentences.

Whatever...PLEASE keep this one going to the end. And, YES, I still have it as a favorite and a follow. Take care and be well. Ja ne for now.

"Tux"
tuxjim chapter 2 . 12/19/2013
I just wanted to let you know that, so far, I REALLY like this story, and where you're taking it.

I've added it to both my 'follow' and 'favorite' lists.

I'll add more comments after i finish what you have posted so far.

Take care and be well. Ja ne for now.

"Tux"
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