Reviews for Not quite so simple
CharmedAli chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
You aren't the only one who had thoughts like this and if you have no intention of writing any more I may have to do my own, more future than this one but I want to play with her struggle of what next...
au2weosu chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
i really like this please update soon
Grande chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Great job - I would very much like to see this story continue, I think it could be very interesting.
Zivarocks44 chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
AAAAAAAAAAMAZING! please continue
ChEmMiE chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Would love more!
tjcurr chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Nice-I also felt that Ziva was a little too expressive in this episode-but now you've pointed out that it could have been written this way intentionally.

Your writing is good-good grammar, clear sentence structure, etc. You also have a good balance of description vs motion-enough detail to be able to see the scene in my head, without distracting from the plot. I really hope you'll continue posting your work.
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