|Reviews for Time of dying|
| Katara Melody Cullen chapter 9 . 12/9/2011
| Asya55 chapter 3 . 11/5/2011
Wow! That was hot, tense and just awesome. It wasn't just sex for both of the, not this time, it was much more, missing each other, the hurt they both have since Joe died, how Billy was diff this time... seriously dude, you're nailing this.. I'm so heading to next chapter, but since its 4am, I'd rather read tomorrow, or all words will be one letter zzzz lol. I know I said it more than once, hate to sound like a broken record but this is awesome, great job ;DDD
| Asya55 chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
Oh oh oh, dude, this is so good, its 3.30 am now and I'm dying to read ch3 lol. This chap was short but so tense, its building up, what happened with Joe, and now how screwed up Billy is, Jess is so diff, phew, too much to deal with.. Great job girl, really.. Personally, watching the movie I was Team Hume family, you might change my mind now lol ;D
| Asya55 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Wow, dude, wow, that's one badass start :D I had to take a look today and now, I want to read more, told ya, you got me hooked.. Ahhhh heading to ch2 now :D
| Sam and Dean crazy ass wench chapter 9 . 5/21/2011
I just realised while I'm sitting here I'm work that I forgot I had this update so sorry hun yeah for Billy for being alive loved it I so loved the start of it when he seen Joe again Omg girl I'm so happy that he left with Jess I didn't think he would you did such an amazing job girl on this story hun loved it so much I'm on the way now to read your new update :)oxoxoxoxo
| kari10 chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
Awesome girl cant believe it's over
| xThexFightingxIrishx chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
well dear, you certainly didn't disappoint me at all. i loved it. you really kept billy in character and i could see him doing all the things you wrote in for him here in this chapter. i can only IMAGINE how pissed he'd be after getting fucked up like that. and i'm glad that jess stuck by his side and took care of him. i figured she would, that she wouldn't give up on him because he'd never given up on her, even after she left for a better life. and though i was wondering where you were gonna take it the whole time i was reading it, i found myself smiling when i finally got down to the end. i really did enjoy it and this had been another great story of yours dear. you did SUCH a wonderful job on it and i couldn't be more proud of you. at least YOU can finish yours. lol. me? *looks down and rubs socked foot on the carpet* well... not so much. i tend to start writing something and then get stuck and if i don't keep on with it, i give it up. so that's why i started all those on my libbyloo92 account and this one too and haven't finished any of them yet. i just... i need people to keep pushing me to continue or it'll never get done. but at least you have the ability to write kickass stories and FINISH them. :)
| hoppnhorn chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
') I LOVED THIS. omgoodness. Girl you should never EVER EVER be nervous. You nailed this like you always do. Just incredible.
I don't even want to know what my face looked like when I read that Billy was seeing Joey. I was horrified. In a good way. I instantly thought he was a goner. Little old pessimistic me. I wanted to cry, both because of losing Billy and also because of the touching reunion of the boys. Oh my god. If this had happened in the movie, I'd never be able to keep a dry eye. This was stunningly well done. Absolutely amazing. I'm gonna quote you, but YOU are the master. ugh. I saw this scene clearer than day. Then Jess showed up and her lips weren't moving(which btw, was a great visual, seriously felt like a film technique. you're so good) and I was THRILLED. my boy was alive after all. As much as I love me some Joey, I was happy to see him go. Long live Billy Darley.
The way you go on to describe him during recovery is brilliant. Exactly how I imagine someone as tough as Billy would deal with it. He's not used to being physically weak so he'd have a hard time. Very true to character. I'm gonna keep saying this, so frikin good. It makes me happy to no end when you write Billy. He's always right on target.
I was wondering what would happen if he lived. And you gave me a great answer. Bravo girl. Bravo. I can't image he'd be able to stick around in Stokely and you're so right. Billy Darley is king of Boston, where else could he go? Where ever he wants his next throne to be. BOOM. perfect. I wanted to clap for you. Now I want him to show up in Ohio so I can wash his Mustang. X) very very lovingly.
No, this definitely wasn't the end of the Notorious and Merciless Billy Darley, this was just the next chapter in his life; a new fucking beginning...
The End...of this fucking story anyway ;)
Perfect. Seriously. I have no other words. That was the perfect ending. Guh. Someone call Garrett, we're refilming the movie. SHAVE THAT MAN'S HEAD. ;)
I loved this story and I CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE. I love Riley and love everything you write. Bring it onnnnnn. ) -R
| AprilC3604 chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
Omg girl this was awesome! He didn't die yayayayayayay I'm happy can you tell lol
That beginning wiht Billy and Joe was just ahhhh omg so awesome. I want to be there with them both but reading it I felt like I was.
I'm sure jess was scared out of her mind she was going to lose him. Let the girl be emotional billy! Lol she loves him you you do PERFECT with expressing that and keeping them in character. Sooooo talented.
I thought she was gonna leave without him for a sec. I'm glad they left together. What will they get into now lol
You rock girl. I loved it soooooo freakin much. Luv ya!
| Potatis chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
OMG I'm sooooo glad he didn't die. And OMG in the ending, I thought that she would leave without him AGAIN but then they both left, PUH, that was a relief.
THANK YOU for an amazing story. You are one of my favorite authors, and this chapter proves why!
| leeseelee chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
FYI, You can google the script or put the movie on subtitles ... it's stokely hall.
| Carla1989 chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
Awesome story. Loved every minute of it. You did a great job with tht final chapter and its nice having a happy ending
| Carla1989 chapter 8 . 5/18/2011
Awwwwww! That was so sad. I actually feel sorry for Billy. Hope he makes it
| GarrettsGirl chapter 9 . 5/18/2011
Loved every fuckin second! What an amazing ending to a fuckin amazing story(s)! Loved it! I can't say anymore than that! Update your other soon babe, I can't wait for it! Luv ya xxx
| Dalonega Noquisi chapter 9 . 5/18/2011