Reviews for Raw
WhispersInTheShawdows chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
This is great!
AdoAnnieCarnes chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Wow. I can't really decide how I feel about this. I mean, I loved it, but it was so abstract and beautiful and I can't figure the whole thing out, really. But I like that, I think. It was like Santana; not quite unraveling enough for you to see in all the way. Great job!
Alezabee chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
"Santana would sit in her bathtub with the scalding water burning her skin anew. It would be another four o'clock that she'd witness; it would be the fourth night that week. She would be plagued with four, like it's the only thing she could count up to. She would find the square root of four and it would be two – just her and an absent party of one. She would rather believe it was rainbows than to know that even math failed her."

I loved the whole story, but especially this paragraph. Awesome character study of Santana. Keep writing!