Reviews for The Unraveling, or The Perils of Powerful Magic
MinaMauveine chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I love all the little intricacies you've weaved into your tale. You've made Zedd's inner turmoil deliciously fun to read. It's great to get a taste of a spell that promises more than you can get, like a gamble with one's life.

Wonderfully crafted!
8-Wolke-8 chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
This was brilliant! I love your way of writing Zedd. I always thought that he must have struggled with his many burdens at some point. You also captured the symbolic lines, like Zed asking himyels if he was the nightmare, very well. Don't be dissapointed about have├čing no reviews. You would deserve a dozen.