Reviews for Rose Red and Violent Violet
LittleWing chapter 14 . 8/5/2011
Very interesting. Rose seems conflicted in her need to survive, yet her desire to not hurt Xander, which of course she's already done...seems to be twice that she's done it. This is very interesting. I like how Rose knew Spike before he was ever a vampire; am very interested in that back story. Definitely looking forward to more of this one. Nicely done.
Robbase231 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
this is an interesting one...I never thought of spike turning "twilight" but Xander sure struck me as a character who could.

It will be interesting how you end this Rose arc, she obviously is some kind of split personality/ demon hiding in a human kind of deals, I wonder if Spike saves Xander when she goes all violet eyed on his ass XD

I like that your taking your time with the characters, to many people do this dialogue and it bugs the hell out of me

"spike, I want you to make hot monkey love to me"

'yes Xander, even though I have hated your guts this whole smegging time I think that'a a good plan"


"bugger off you queer" *spike leaves the room*

"w-well fine like that..." *plops on the couch* *dials phone*

"HEEEY, OZ hows it going...doing anything tonight?"

Well its not EXACTLY like that, but what I'm getting at is that people just throw a generic confession on it and go through a few sex poses in and call it a fanfic, and that's just...boring

Keep up the good work!
SceneOne chapter 5 . 4/16/2011
not bad, i like your characterization of the main cast, not too sure about "Rose" though. you might want to dial back a little on the amount of storytime original characters take up as it can start to drift into mary sue territory. otherwise nice work, keep it up
crimsonlove4evr chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
I like it ;) can't wait to see what happens next.