That was the biggest "oh shit" moment!
Loved your story

This is really interesting. I loved it.

Very interesting, and quite the unexpected and dark turn there at the end. :)

Dude, this was tight.

This is why I hate children. I was pulling my hair out for the entire story screaming, "Why are you so bloody gullible!?" Depressing ending but it's a unique one. I'll give you that.

Fuck man...I was really getting into this story...and to find out its a abandoned one shot...bummer!

At the end, that's Lupin with Voldemort's wand, right? He talks like Lupin and is compassionate.
But what about the snake patronus? That indicates Voldemort because Lupin wouldn't have a snake.
But can Voldie conjure a patronus at all? It needs happy thoughts - Voldie isn't a happy person.
Aaarrgghh. Wheels within wheels. Well done.

You know I read this story a couple of years ago and it was so depressing I almost didn't read it again. Now I feel rather stupid as I completely missed the twist at the end, good story, depressing but very good twist.

Seat of you pants, edge of the chair story. Well done! I would like to read more. What was the cause of the ‘summer flu?’ Was it Harry, or magicals in general that caused the shift, or something the government did that did the opposite? Hmm. Possibilities

I liked it :)

Really liked it, especially "Remus"! Makes me wonder what's REALLY going on if Tom is pretending to be Remus

This was incredible! I got shivers! Andddddd WHATTTY WAS UP WITH REMUS AT THE END!?
Thanks for writing!

- SPIH

I absolutely love this, if you ever decide to continue it I would be ecstatic, I was hoping that they would find hermione granger along the way after harry met the creevys, but it was still super cool

This was great, thanks. Liked it

Bloody (pun intended) awesome story, I'll put in my Zombie proof vault.

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