Reviews for The Garden Plot
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Sorry I aint buying it. Jake had the whole side of his body crushed and Bella couldnt care less. she visited him ONCE to tell him to fuck off that the kiss on the mountain was just bullshit because she felt guilty. A knock on jakes head aint gonna do a thing. Bella would have to have a clue and she never has.
This a problem with too many fics. Fluff is nice but when you make characters that are so unlike the canon counterparts it becomes something.. less.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
Jake didnt put his foot in his mouth. Bella is just...weird. She is selfish sick and twisted in her head. Who the fuck would want skinny, cold, dead pale and ... creepy, when they could have Jake. Bella of course is a coward afraid of everything that has to do with living.. Since her means of escaping real life has left she wants to make everyone suffer Jake should have let her drown like a rat. Jake may get what he wants but he sure isnt gonna want what he gets.
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Truly entertaining and sweet. Young Jake and Bells finding their way to be together while building a garden was delightful. Thanks for writing and leaving this posted for newer readers.
remeyqueen74 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
very adorable
rhythm junkie chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Awww yummy Bella/Jake goodness
Lori94 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Cute!
fullmoon422 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Very very sweet. I love the gardening analogies and teasing, so very Jake and Bella. Especially love the ending. Great job.
bluebaby3296 chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
oh this was too cute! few lil errors in spacing but i think fanfiction does that sometimes...other than that i loved it. The ending was too funny! The rake thing, omg i bout peed my pants. Seriously one of the best one shots ever!
whenxXxshexXxcries chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
This was really sweet. I normally don't even bother to read the Bella/Jacob pairings because I don't like Jacob. But this was great.
ladybug82896 chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Awww. That was pretty cute. I have to say though, I wish you would make another chapter.