Reviews for Coming out
writinginstars chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Well, the idea is good, but in my honest opinion, this needs some polishing and probably a little bit of reworkings for everything to flow more evenly together, somethings I felt like could have been expanded or outright deleted. At the moment I like I'm being too blunt, but that's the best way right? Anyway, I like whave, but I think with a bit of tweaking it could be amazing like. ]
HELEN chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Ellieandra chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
sooo cute!
Storylover158 chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
love it write more
narnia365 chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
That was so cute!
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