Reviews for Severed Ties
TealEyedBeing chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
No happy ending... you don't see many of those around here x3 which makes it just all the better
Everythinganime14 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Awwww, so sad. You should've made a second chapter with Zoro being all like.

"screw you i'm not marrying this person I love Luffy."

Like an alternate ending or something.
KirBy18 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
its an awesome first capter will there be a second? please i cant live with the thought tht zoro would just use luffy like tht :(
roo17 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Aw, poor Lu. I felt sorry for him. Although, I did like Ace's "It's eleven O' fucking clock!" I'll have ta remember that!
LuffyxZoro15 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
This is a really good first chapter (:

I love the pairing LuffyxZoro and ive read so many different

types of situations they been in. This is one of the saddest T.T

I'm looking forward to reading more 3

Please continue its really good, it just crushes me that Zoro would do that to Luffy DX and i get so into these kind of stories that bitch better back off Luffy's man xD
Green-san chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
... You're mean Vee-neesan, I'm not supposed to read such heart-breaking stuff in the morning ;A;

I love the hints to Kuina and how realistic it was... Even if I love the romantic crap IIIOTL