Reviews for The Journal
jk chapter 16 . 5/11
actually Edward...yes I need you to leave in order to be happy. I cant stand to fucking look at you. You didn't just make a mistake. You didn't cheat on me once...you cheated on me OVER and OVER AGAIN! Your a worless piece of shit and I hope you die old and alone. Actually I hope as soon as I leave your ass you start fucking around and get aids...it would be an extra bonus if your dick fell off...but I will settle for herpes
jk chapter 11 . 5/11
ya, marriage counseling...that will solve everything. I hate that you use that, like look how responsible I am, bellas so level headed,something that most women would not fucking be when told that he has been having sex with another woman for half a fucking year and just fucked her a couple weeks ago!...ewww by the way.
jk chapter 9 . 5/11
bellas not at all concerned about getting a std? Edwards affair has lasted 6 months...and you can get a false negative on a hiv test for guess what? SIX MONTHS!...kates husband could have been cheating on her...we don't know do we? kate COULD very well have a std...and even if they used condoms EVERYTIME he could still get an std...and guess what? he could have just given it to his wife! She is sooooooooooo fucking stupid for not insisting that he use a condom...in my opinion shes stupid for having sex with him at all! Why in the fuck should he get ANY pleasure out of her?
jk chapter 7 . 5/11
what she should be thinking is what a fucking creep her husband is... that hes tired of his at work fuck and looking for some variety...that's seems way more plausible then feeling happy that her affair having husband touched her...Edward can die, seriously
jk chapter 6 . 5/11
chapter 6? Wow bella is one weak ass, pathetic woman! feeling wanted? LOL Your husband has been fucking another woman for SIX MONTHS! and for the first time in years he holds you and that makes you feel wanted?
jezus
jk chapter 4 . 5/11
if a man cheated on me I would fucking want him to touch me, NO THANKS
jk chapter 2 . 5/11
ummm how about no? Edward fucking cheated on her! Bella should absofuckinglutely leave his ass! Theres no going back after that. She should fucking divorce his ass ASAP...he broke his vows...broken vowsdivorce...if he wants to recommit himself and bella wants to let them then they could get remarried...with new fucking vows
monica03 chapter 16 . 5/8
I wish there was even more to this story. I would love to know how they got to a better place...

Can someone pass me the tissues please?
Kickinl8tr chapter 16 . 2/17
This was amazing. Thank you.
Zelha chapter 16 . 1/19
Well, thank you for making me tear up.

Excellent piece.
twlightbella chapter 9 . 1/18
Aw sweet husband and wife moment
JK chapter 12 . 1/17
die...Edward...DIE

seriously...please just go away, kate can have your lying cheating ass...

he says hes sorry and starts coming home on time...for a couple days and bella thinks that's him showing her how sorry he is? really?
JK chapter 11 . 1/17
WE CAN GET THROUGH THIS...WITH HELP...lol WHAT A FUCKING JOKE...JUST LEAVE HIS CHEATING ASS BELLA! OR FUCK STAY WITH HIM BUT FOR SURE DIVORCE HIM! HE CHEATED HES NO LONGER ALLOWED TO CALL YOU HIS WIFE!
JK chapter 9 . 1/17
I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY SHE WOULD HAVE SEX WITH HIM...WHEN HES BEEN CHEATING ON HER FOR HALF A FUCKING YEAR!
JK chapter 7 . 1/17
WHY IS SHE GIVING IN SO EASILY?
EDWARD CAN FUCKING DIE OF HIV FOR ALL I CARE
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