Reviews for You Could Do Better
NovaKeepsKeys chapter 1 . 9/23/2018
I know it’s been a while but I would love o see more of this one.
MadamButterworth chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
I read this when it came out so I genuinely feel terrible for waiting this long to leave a review but I just wanted to let you know that this is one of my all time favorite stories in this fandom! I consistently reread it probably 4-5 times a year and I'm so grateful that you uploaded it! This was actually the first story that got me into pezberry as well, so thank you :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
Loved this, it was beautifully written and extremely amusing and highly adorable!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
I love this so much, please come back to this or make a sequel it's so great!
Dezired86 chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
wonderful writing. Loved the dynamic between the two
A2463 chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Really love it! I feel like this should be more than a oneshot. Please consider continuing this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
I loved this. Had to wait a long time to get the much needed conversation but its so nice to read a fic where one of the characters not only knows how much communication could .solve their issues, but actively seeks it. Thank you so much
Arial Wolf chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Oh that's priceless
brilliant thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
awww this was perfect! thank u for this, writer :)
Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Ey I think you should write a sequel, you're an amazing writer and I'm sure I'm not the only one who'd appreciate it! xoxo
guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
nice.. more chapters.. :)
Doritos79 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
wonderful cute i love Pezberry :)
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Wow, this story is incredibly genius. I mean, it's so detailed and creative.

You write wonderfully, such a great story.
Thank you for writing.
IzaGleek chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Wow, loved this, would have been happy to read more...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Awesome :)
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