Reviews for Immortality
Charlee56 chapter 4 . 6/21
Y'know? This was shaping up really nicely. Why'd you stop? I'm gonna say that you should've gotten the whole thong out there and written the real deal! Give it a go. I'll fave ya even! I think you have the makings of a great writer in you. But you'll never find out until you give your chops a real workout.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/16
hey i like your story...
Llew444 chapter 4 . 10/26/2014
carry on ! plez! i luv dis stowy!
oh and the quest...

The god, the half blood and the mortal shall face
A terrible threat to the demigod race
the questers and more shall see a sign
to face underground and then with the mine

S'Tidey chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
I'm crazy in a good way and a smart know-it-all to, even though I'm not the latter sometimes! Ugh! I hate boy problems that's why I don't date, and I never even had a crush!
Scarlet Sapphire Angel 15 chapter 4 . 7/5/2014
Update more please
Talia-Elizabeth chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Oh, school Problmes?

Last year everyone thought a good friend of mine and I liked each other so, fun.
Hope it gets better.
Rajell Cellar chapter 4 . 3/9/2014
Cool book. It's pretty good. Please upload the next chapter.
LalaMay chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
How about the Big 7 quest? Question: Do you ever use this story anymore?:
Caliscity chapter 4 . 1/30/2014
I love it! AWESOME!
Caliscity chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I love it!
Id65 chapter 4 . 1/29/2014
Review, Quest? Cyclopes problems, meet Percys half brother.
Id65 chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
My Review. I think this story is very original
Id65 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I hearth rant, I accept the rant
the flower bed chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
Do I like it? Are you kidding?! I simply love it! Update as soon as possible or I will pulverise you! Kidding. I love it!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
so in love with it
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