|Reviews for In an Alternate Universe|
| keacdragon chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
| brooklynturtle chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Yes! You should write more!
| LTA chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
You should keep withing it
| goofygirl chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
you should write more.
| WonderWhy chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
OMG i was reading the plagarized version of this and was like WTF at the second half cuz it was SHIT and i reviewed her and said it was awful, but the first part was very detailed and wonderful. then i see your review and im like holy crap thats why the first half was so good. you did wonderfully with the detail and the storyline altogether, i feel so sorry that your story got plagarized and i think the girl on here who alerted you is very sweet, you go girlie :) that girl who plagarized a perfectly good story and turned it to shit should go to hell -_-
| suns and stars chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
this was a great story
| Coraline Starr chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
It would be really interesting to have a flashback of what happened during the fight between Tarzan and Clayton.
Or maybe Tarzan is actually alive and is watching Clayton and Jane now? Just something to consider.
BTW, BellaLovesGoodStoriesForMe ( author) wrote a Tarzan fic. S/he copied your text exactly, and then added in her/his own idea of Jane and Clayton making babies together and moving out of the jungle and forgetting all about Tarzan. Just so you know. "It's called Different ending for Tarzan."
This story has potential. The other person's? It lost all of its potential once s/he copied your text exactly. And also when s/he added the poorly worded section involving Jane and Clayton making a family together...
Unless, of course, BellaLovesGoodStoriesForMe is actually you as well. That would just be lame...
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
You should continue this story! I don't like cliffies! :( plz? Somebody agree with me!
| TheAPrincess chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Ooo, very good and dark. Poor Tarzan though :( lol still a good story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
A little dark. Not too ooc. Interesting idea though