Reviews for Second Chances
wolfpac3000 chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Damn, She just grilled him and pointed out all the flaws of the Naruto series. I always did hated how Naruto was such a mary-sue in canon, oh well, can't wait to see what Akatsuki's going to due old Sasuke maybe he might become the new Madara, hmm
GenoBeast chapter 1 . 4/9/2011

Thankfully Hiyori was the one to find Naruto...if not then we may have had a delusional Naruto that thought his past was all good. I don't expect him to totally change but if given the chance to 'learn' then he is intelligent. Now alot of people place him as a person that learns by doing, I think that he is forced to go that route because he lacks the foundation to understand the more complex concepts for jutsu theory.

So maybe the Kyuubi is Naruto's Zan- or just a merging sort of.
Arch Zell chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Update soon
apocalyps24 chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
im liking the start... i have only one request dont make shinigami stronger than shinobi... its my opinion (not that it matters) that although they use different energies a kage lvl ninja would be aproximatly the same strength as a captain lvl shinigami seated oficers would be like jounin and chunin and unseated shit would be like gennin and acadamy students

otherwise looking forward to more

DragonOfApocalypse chapter 1 . 4/9/2011

i love it! :D

it was awesome! :D
BadReader chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Please don't bother with how his death affects poeple. The chapter had enough of that crap already. It was way over the top, reptitive and there's little reason for a shinigami to have it out with a plus like that about their life, their friends/enemies, etc. It's a scene that just didn't make much sense as soon as the shinigami came into the story. It's also confusing as to the Bijuu and how the shinigami supposedly know all about'em but don't interfere with them when they think everyone spiritual is their jurisdiction? That, and not the Naruto world really needs to be addressed next chapter imo. Give the story a good foundation in why and how the two worlds are connected, and why the shinigami leave the shinobi too their own world domination devices. Also, who is the Shinigami?
Ninpou chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
ehm.. how the hell do you survive a fucking rasengan WITH kyuubi's chakra right in your face! couldn't realy enjoy this chapter to be honest, i mean first you let naruto get pwned in a fight, and then you continue to give him a verbal beatdown for the entire chapter. yeah, we all know naruto is freaking delusional, but damn, he looked even more retarded then in canon. ah well i'm just gonna wait for the next chapter and hope naruto isn't that retarded anymore.

looking forward to the next update.
DarkseidAlex chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
I glad somebody is going to try to pair Naruto with Matsumoto because I never seen it yet. I really loved the first chapter and how hiyori told naruto the truth about how everyone treated him because honestly he need the truth to be thrown at him so he can hopefully wake up and stop be stupid.
Naginator chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Hmm very good so far and loved their rants, naruto is def delusional in canon but prob had to to keep from going insane but look forward to a more mature less idiotic naruto next time
BlackG chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
wow, how does one survive a rasengan to the head?
Tikky Mikk chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Interesting story, hope you update soon.
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