Reviews for Present for Hinata!
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 12/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
JadaImani2000 chapter 2 . 8/20/2016
Cute story so far...please write more chapters...
mamma jamma chapter 2 . 8/6/2014
Ooohh this story is getting good!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
Can you maybe post soon again? And very good story I enjoyed it.
BritMer chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
This was very good. I hope that you can write another chapter.
Odinson91 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I hope you finish this soon.
Da Vicks Guy chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
Damn this one's really good sigh if only you had updated
Rose Tiger chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
This looks like fun. Keep going.
Uzumakiluver chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
Oh I absolutely adore this story so far. I wish with everything I have that the actual manga runs along these tracks in the future!

Good luck with future writing and chapters! Update soon!
zaradan chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
This is quite good so far, damn shame not many people have read what you've put down here my friend.

i hope to see more in the near future.

your friend, Zaradan.
NaruhinaObsessed chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
that was so beautiful, nice job to the max
anon213 chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
please update this ff, i like it.
sal8497 chapter 2 . 5/23/2011
please update, i like it
shrek04 chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
I like it

please update soon
midnightoasis chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
This is pretty good so far. I always enjoy post-confession storylines.

Something to bear in mind: watch out for run-on sentences and verb tense consistency. The first couple of paragraphs in this chapter felt a bit off (try sticking with past tense alone). I find that reading something I've written out loud helps to find where the natural pauses (and, thus, commas/periods/etc.) fit best.

Still, I'm curious to see where you're taking this. Keep it up!
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