|Reviews for A Growing Maddness|
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
Ne should kill his boss too... And stop making me cry...
| SunFlor chapter 6 . 4/9/2011
Hello There! Ive just read this and it was amazing!
I loved it! Poor Russia :(
The chapters 1, 2, 3 were so sad T_T
Sorry for my english u.u Im a boring argentinian who liked this fic, and maybe someday... ejem... you would let me tralate it to my language?
Hahaha, not now, but I would like doing it :D
| Fai'swingedchronicles chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Isn't it called the Mongel (invasion)? Not Mongrel?
| Fai'swingedchronicles chapter 6 . 4/9/2011
woah...I suggest taking this down (all the chapters) and then putting them back up once you put the appropriate spaces.
When ever someone new talks (or says their thoughts) you need to make it a new paragraph.
"Ya I can!" She said as she grabbed her book.
"Suuure." He answered back unconvinced.
Like that. Also, when a paragraph gets to big. These are just huge blocks of words...its really no wonder if people dont review. Its not because the story is horrible its because its too hard to /read/ it. People like it if the story looks readable and this just doesnt.
If you need to leave it like this for whatever reason perhaps add just a few more spaces? Or go to deviant art sometimes that site makes this type of writing look better.
If you don't know how to change it there is an edit button on the site as your going to publish it.