Reviews for Reluctance
Fatal Mars chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Very snarky! I enjoy some good Hero and Whisper. I wish she had been a wife option. I love her defiance even when she's defeated. Something I like to see in my heroines. Very Sexy I enjoyed getting a glimpse of evil Hero. He had to be his name was Lucian can't get more evil than that. I had always wished to go at him as evil hero, but it has yet to happen.
EfficientLazyness chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Nicely done. Somewhat funny fic. The single thing I don't like from this story, is that juding by " Big Mistake" Lucan is a sociopath, a murderer, generally bad guy. You know the type of guy who generally get locked up and face the death penalty. So while I like the way you portray the story, i am more than disturbed b the fact that any woman would willingly have a relationship with a crazed lunatic like that.
Belisante chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Lucan and Whisper interaction & attraction cracks me up. :)

-Same.
almostinsane chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Great story! LOL. Go Lucan! Thanks for writing this.