Reviews for Twists of Fate
tamwhit chapter 15 . 6/23/2017
Please update your story soon as
miszharleyquinn chapter 15 . 4/29/2014
Do continue please
mickkila chapter 15 . 11/27/2013
Please update very cool story
egilmar chapter 15 . 10/29/2013
Me encantarĂ­a ver esta historia finalizada. Hay algunaposibilidad? ?
jenn008 chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
babesbraves chapter 15 . 4/16/2013
Wow please finish this fantastic book it's story line is so new and refreshing it holds the imagination and keeps you wanting more! Please finish it as it would be a crying shame to waste such a potentially epic book!
InuFan21497 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Be sure to finish the story! I want to read the rest of it!
TheWhitlockGirl chapter 5 . 9/25/2012
Loved reading Marcus' POV
TheWhitlockGirl chapter 15 . 7/21/2012
just found this and am really enjoying this story...hope you get back to writing it
Babysis64 chapter 15 . 5/7/2012
oh my is Bella ever a very quiet new born she is well disaplined and i like the way she is in this story sorry about the spelling mistakes i Peter did deserve his punishment and of all people Bella Swan did it oh my goodness and everyone was trying to hold in there laught so if Bella is Marcus's descendant,Jasper is Aro's descendant and Peter is Caius's descendant so why are they after Bella yet and what is she to do is she that powerful of a vampire that people want Peter should get his finger back also,a day of punishment should do and why was Marcus upset that Jasper and Bella did and completed there mating ritual i can't understand why he got upset about that and especially if Jasper and Bella are mates they should let them be and complete what ever they have to do as mates right well until your update you have yourself a good week
Babysis64 chapter 14 . 5/7/2012
I thought this chapter was good and the way Jasper was able to kind of read Peter's mind was pretty cool and that was through Bella's gifts this is so awesome so i wonder if any other guys are going to be able to hug Bella and i can't wait to find out who decendants they belong too well Peter is related to Caius some how and i wonder who Bella and Jasper is related too
Babysis64 chapter 13 . 5/7/2012
Oh so Peter is the last living line to Caius but i still don't see where it comes to play with him that Marcus wants him i still don't get it and why is Jasper so protective of Bella is it just because she is a day old only.I wonder if Rosalie will treat her a little different know that she is a vampire and not human cause she was so jealous of Bella and being human but Edward killed her so there is no chance at that at all.
Babysis64 chapter 12 . 5/7/2012
wow it is interesting to find out Peter is working for Marcus and Edward is working for Aro to find the one and it is Peter that found her and for Edward to find the one he finds a female and thinks she is the one this is just sick if you ask me eww gross Edward always thinks he has all of it yea right he doesn't he just uses people to play games with same with that Alice seems like they are the evil twins and not Jane and Alec now doesn't it maybe the twins in Volturri has competition with Alice and Edward lol
Babysis64 chapter 11 . 5/7/2012
wow this story is awesome so if Marcus wanted to meet Bella that means she must be a very powerful vampire and very well wanted especially if Marcus wants to meet her wow again what and who is Bella Swan to the people
Babysis64 chapter 10 . 5/7/2012
wow this is a good chapter with Bella waking up and finding she has a couple of gifts with her the bonds and not feeling thirsty,and probably a shield and i wonder what else she is going to be interesting say the least.
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