|Reviews for You're a Wizard, Eri|
| Cryers-Chan or AmporaEdelstein chapter 4 . 10/11/2013
You. Continue. Please. ; u ;
| Isimimai chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Do you mind if people use this prompt for other crossovers? It's a very interesting prompt and I would love to write my own take of it for Eridan crossing into a different fandom. :D
| Kaitlyn Vantas chapter 4 . 9/3/2013
This is a really good story! I can't wait to read more, update soon please!
| ParanoidSylph chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
"I'm going to try to update this story at least once every two weeks," you said.
So, when will that "every two weeks" be over? I do so enjoy reading from Eridan's point of view, and you write it very well.
| xX Feathered Xx chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
whoa hufflepuff. Didn't see that coming at all. :3
| Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
I like it so far!
| Habato chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
pLEAAASE tell me you'll continuing this! :D It's soooooooo good!
| Pearlbunny chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
| TheInsanityThatHidesWithin chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
Update soon, please! :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2013
i couldn't stop laughing at the huffflepuff part.
| Witch of Happy Endings chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
This is an awesome story and you should continue. Please continue.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
AH LAST SENTANCE FORGOTTEN W
| 9tail-Naruto chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
I have actually said this same exact review not but a few months ago onto your AO3 channel, but I figured that this would also be a good place to put my rather long review, just to make sure it's fresh in your mind! Why hasn't this gem of a story continued? :( I love Hufflepuff Eridan!
I think Hufflepuff is the perfect House for Eri, most of Eri's personality is fabricated, he's just overacting to be like the historical figures he sees within his books that he loves. Eridan also actually LOVES wizards and magic, but he knows it's fake so it upsets him. (He's secretly doing a jig deep on the inside, IT'S MAGIC AND IT'S REAL!) Eridan also hates using fish-puns, he's actually mentioned it to Fef in a log somewhere... I don't remember which one...
Anyway, The only reason WHY Eri has his "destroy all lowbloods" plots is because of the great Highblooded Historical figures, he knows that he CAN kill them all just by lightening up on the Gl'bgolyb's feeding schedule, but it'd upset Feferi, who he's flushed for. Not only that, he actually LIKES some of the 'lowbloods' (not that he'll admit it) He also knew that the Doomsday Device that he wanted from Vriska probably wouldn't work in the first place, he mostly does those sort of things to keep up appearances. Which you obviously know by what you've said within your chapters, but it never helps to touch upon some of the reasons why your choice was so great!
Some examples of Eridan showing more emotions than he normally does, taken from the log Gamzee: Indulge in emotional theatrics.
TC: BeCaUsE OuR GoOd bRo sOlLuX JuSt kIcKeD ThE WiCkEd mOtHeRfUcKiN ShIt
CA: wwhat the fuck do you mean by that
CA: are you sayin hes dead
TC: YeAh :o(
CA: oh fuck
CA: oh god fuck noww i feel like an asshole
(See? Eri actually feels BAD that Sol's dead, he actually cares for Karkat's feelings, even though he thought his problem was much more important at the start of this conversation.)
TC: ArE YoU SuRe i cAn't hElP A bRoThEr Up iNtO HiS MoThErFuCkIn cHiLl?
CA: i dont knoww
CA: it probably doesnt matter
CA: my feelins seem petty and meaninless noww
CA: she had better things to wworry about than my ovverwwrought bullshit
(See? He sees that his problems aren't that big of a deal comparatively to the others and lets them grieve for Sol's... Short throes in the land of the dead, but hey, everyone thought he was dead permanently except for Feferi, but she had foreknowledge from Gl'bgolyb.)
Here's another pesterlog that shows that Eri cares about his friends... In a rather indirect way? Kanaya: Answer CA.
CA: but somethin thatll kill all land dwwellers wwhat else wwould i be after
GA: Can You Just For A Moment Entertain The Thoughts Of One Untouched By Megalomaniacal Derangement And Tell Me Why Id Want To Assist You With That
CA: im not goin to vvery wwell kill you am i that wwould be fuckin unconscionable
CA: wwhat kind of friend wwould i be
(See? Here he's actually calling Kan his friend, and he also WANTS her to Auspistice between himself and Vriska, of course he's insulting Kan while asking her, but hey, this is ERIDAN we're talking about.)
GA: Land And Sea Dwellers Alike Will All Die
GA: Because Of The Game We Are About To Play
GA: And I Agree The Fate Of The Race Is Important But Its In My Hands Now
GA: All Of Ours Really
CA: wwell ok
CA: ordinarily id call bullshit on terrible stinkin bs like that but i knoww you dont really lie about stuff
CA: unless its to yourself
CA: but thats wwhy i bother evven talking to you i wwouldnt evven be here SAYIN any of this otherwwise
(Here's another example about Eri knowing his friends or at least the ones he considers his friends. He knows that Kan doesn't lie about things and believes her, even if it IS farfetched and most people do not believe her at all during this time.)
CA: fine i get it ill step off
CA: you dont wwant to be our auspistice cause you dont wwant to get locked into that sort of relation wwith her i can respect that
GA: No Thats Not It
CA: yeah it is your real feelins run pretty awwful RUDDY methinks evverybody knowws it
CA: especially that assblood karkat he and me havve you so pegged about that its upright silly
CA: but its cool its totally fine dont wworry ill leavve you alone and givve you a shot
(here's an example that Eri isn't quadrant crazy! He respects his friends' feelings, even if he IS a bit insulting about it.)
I hope these help you get your writing spark back in some way, I know that this story hasn't been updated in more than a year, but I can always hope! Thank you and I hope you'll update again soon!
| absoluteParadox chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
I know the chances are slim, but might you finish this? Now you have me hooked...
| DotTheAmazing chapter 4 . 6/17/2012
I see this hasn't been updated in over a year... UPDATE PLEASE. I LOVE THE IDEA SO MUCH.
One small thing, though... Luna's dad runs the Quibbler, not her uncle.