|Reviews for Moving Forward|
| Amber Hastings chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
So cute and entertaining!..
I know it's been a long time but ... Please update!
| ninjas-are-everywhere chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
"fearful of the unseen wrench he knew was there"
This was a cool chapter!
| boysenberry chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Really liked this story - was disappointed to see there weren't any more chapters but I'm glad to see you'll be continuing it, perseverance sounds fun!
Love reading adorable fluffy UST stories between Ed and Winry! They deserve a nice long angsty adorable buildup... full of scenes like the creek one in ch2 :)
| Gisel0202 chapter 3 . 7/1/2011
Good chapter :D
| Hellocloser chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
Can I give you a single word ? :o
| Gisel0202 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
YAY! EdWin fluff makes me happy. Keep up the good work!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Dear Author of this wonderful story,
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I could not have been more grateful to read a story this well done! I always read Edwin stories that are just... I don't know, cheesy, I guess. But this one was so deep in meaning for me, this is probably the first great Edwin fic I've read in a long, long time. I encourage you to adapt this into a story of some sort, since you have a pretty convincing plot right here. If not, then I hope you continue perfecting your works later on, here on FanFiction, or anywhere else! This was a great read and I enjoyed every minute of it!
| Hellocloser chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Yeah.. I think you should turn this into a series. Beautifully written.
| purplekumquat chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I liked this a lot! You captured the moment and I think it was very in character :)