So very sweet. And that chapter repeated twice, just saying.

This is really well written, but why has the text been written twice?

cute

This, I thought, was very well written, but it seems that the story repeats itself another time in this window. It's not necessary, so if you could fix that, that would be nice. I liked the way you portrayed the Tin Man, and it was kind of funny when he started to get annoyed at not being able to move. Nice job!