|Reviews for I Will Become a Ghost|
| titus.king.31 chapter 23 . 3/13
I like the story it was interesting
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/18
| soulspaz chapter 23 . 10/18/2013
Hey dude! I just ready your story in like... a day? Its kick ass! Cant wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
| Xxferessa-TanXx chapter 23 . 10/5/2013
next chappie pleassseeee
| otaku908 chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
Okay, usually I steel myself with resolve to NOT review until the very end on a really long story...b-but! I can't help it! Ugh! sdkfjbasdkjcnascas...Hah. I really need to stop fangirling. Naruto! TTTT Please, I want to see their reaction to Naruto...But...GAH! Nevermind, for the sake of the plot (which better be damn good because I have very slight patience) I shall grudgingly await. Hmph...Anyways, might as well drop a compliment as well, ne? Your writing style is well thought, and structured well. It's pleasant to read. Ah. And a word of advice, if you want people to have a tad more of a grasp on what the 'jutsu' should look like, I suggest you put the name in brackets beside it. It would make it less confusing. Oh! Almost forgot. I enjoy how you made OC's that are not overly powerful, nor overly useless. More over, the plot is well constructed and I cannot really guess that well as to what's going to happen next. I happen to hate but love that! xD Hehe, and good job on changing Naruto; once again, not overly weak, not overly powerful, however, it's obvious how much he's grown physically and mentally. I congrat you on a job well done! ;D
| KonohasBlackReaper chapter 23 . 8/21/2013
WOW... Nice story. Really interesting. I just hope that Naruto doesn't end up forgiving everything. I don't want him to burn the village either. I wish at the end, he'd just leave. And I hope Itachi stays alive at the end as well.
Waiting excitedly for the next chapter.
| Trigun chapter 23 . 8/16/2013
So good to see this excellent story updated again. This was a shorter chapter than normal from you, but I still liked it a lot. I really enjoyed the Naruto/Hinata interaction you wrote in this. It was well-written and basically their budding relationship was most signifigant development of the chapter. Good luck with the next chapter, I can't wait to read it.
| Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 6 . 8/17/2013
Letting the evil win. You canon loving motherfucker.
| Pyrophoricity chapter 23 . 8/8/2013
Sweet chap !
i'll wait for the next one, see you !
| General yumi chapter 23 . 8/5/2013
Please pleased PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Adam218 chapter 23 . 8/5/2013
Hooray for another chapter! I don't mind how short it was, for the information we readers got was astounding. Giving more depth to kakashi will assuredly lead to some event related to him sooner or later. I sorta figured that Kumo would fall. I do, however, believe that where Naruto is right now in regards to his psyche and his mind's stability may lead to interesting results. As far as I could tell, he actually wanted to give up, although this can be mistaken for protecting Hinata. Itachi's words will also, hopefully, shed some more light on whatever major event that will be happening next. Keep it up!
| decius23 chapter 23 . 8/1/2013
(too lazy to log in)
oh great, this becomes eventually naruhina...well the story was fun but there are so many naruhina stories out there that i simply CAN'T read another one (Every morning when i'm looking for updates there are at least 15 yaoi and naruhina stories from maybe 20 updates -.-)!
| brandon55604 chapter 23 . 8/1/2013
Read through the entire story today, loved it. Hope you get that next chapter out soon. :)
| Trak The Cat chapter 23 . 8/1/2013
Wow that is really sad, I hope the information about what would have happened to Naruto gets back to the rest of to village. Anyway great chapter as always.
| roboguy45 chapter 23 . 8/1/2013
LOL I hope Kakashi never finds peace, he freaking did nothing but give Naruto pain and I hope Kakashi and his bastard and bitch students Sasuke and Sakura SUFFER.