Reviews for Preposterous Persistence
Staryday chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
Awe so cute! I love happy-sappy endings! I like how Cloud yelled at all of them about not noticing his seduction attempts. It was very cute. Thank you for writing!
Staryday chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
I think I giggled hardest at Zack punching Cloud to save him. The scene with Angeal was funny too but that line "I don't know how to do that thing!" had me in stitches. Kudos!
lovelycrazy chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
this still makes me laugh after all these years of rereading it.
BlackWolf99 chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Hehe good .
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 5/6/2014
I like it
Darkspider chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
Aww. I'm having this horrible fever, cough and body aches but this fic cracked me up so bad! Weirdly enough I preferred it when Cloud was not trying so hard to get their attention and it made me snicker when Cloud announced his birthday wish and made Zack and the others panic a bit that they could lose Cloud!

Really enjoyed this fic!
Enide Dear chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
Lol, yeah, Kunsel is not exactly honourable, hehehe!

Mmmmm...this gave me such a sweet, gushy feeling inside. I'm so glad they all found each other.
Enide Dear chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Oh, Cloud...he really, really does try, no one can blame his persistance XD And all he gets for it is being beat up! Hopefully it will get better with Sephiroth...
Cremello chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Aww, so cute! Cloud's epic fails... awesome! I have just one suggestion: mark the story "complete"? Because it seems to be... But thanks for posting!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
this is precious omg
CharmedbyFire chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
Haha te revelation scene was the best! Love this story :)
Baby-Ayatane chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
Awwwwah ;_ ; Do you ever plan on updatung? PLZ PLZ HHHHNNNNNGH

This was one of the cutesest, funniest pieces I have ever read on this site. I adore Cloud's personality in this, and his boyfriends'. The way you write them together made it seem natural.

I'm a little baffled at having nothing else to say, but do know that I fell into giggles at this line: "All of Midgar would admire his gorgeous sixteen year-old thighs."

So refreshing! Y'know, usually people potray Cloud as this shy little thing, I just enjoy seeing a little more zeal.

Thanks so much for sharing this! I really enjoyed it. :)
Baby-Ayatane chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
Awwwwah ;_ ; Do you ever plan on updatung? PLZ PLZ HHHHNNNNNGH

This was one of the cutesest, funniest pieces I have ever read on this site. I adore Cloud's personality in this, and his boyfriends'. The way you write them together made it seem natural.

I'm a little baffled at having nothing else to say, but do know that I fell into giggles at this line: "All of Midgar would admire his gorgeous sixteen year-old thighs."

So refreshing! Y'know, usually people potray Cloud as this shy little thing, I just enjoy seeing a little more zeal.

Thanks so much for sharing this! I really enjoyed it. :)
bloodrippedcupcake chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
Awwwww! That was so cute! XD update invisible molestation soon! XD ...or else :D
bloodrippedcupcake chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
That was so funny! XD Cloud is such a dumb blonde. If that's what happens when you try to seduce someone, then I would prefer to simply be forever alone. Is it really worth the pain? That a dumb question. If its for those four any amount of pain is worth it! 3
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