Reviews for Stages of Hope
Wonderbee31 chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
With all that Harry and Hermione have been through, I'd wager stable's gonna be an understatement, and will look forward to what it was Hermione told Albus, as well as what other changes are in this universe?
FrostedMidnight chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Oh! I am ever so curious to what happens next! This story is interesting!

Tealeavz chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
I am intrigued ... there is so much you can do with an alternate universe. Already I love your characterization of Severus, it seems as if life in this reality has been kinder to him and it's nice to see him happier. I also very much enjoyed how natural and easy Harry and Hermione's partnership seemed to be. Loved that the dragon had a personality as well! It's the little details that make a story great.

I am very curious as to what Hermione revealed to Albus that shocked him so. Your writing style seemed very natural and sucked me into the new world you've created very quickly (I do especially enjoy beginnings that are in medias res, and you can't get more action right away than fighting off a dragon)Can't wait to read more!
Izabella Black chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
first of all thank you for sharing.

second this -

Your robes are…red," she finally said, strangely accusing.

"Burgundy!" Severus protested. Red was tacky. Burgundy, however, had class.

"And what did you do to your hair?" She asked in horrified fascination.

Snape's hand rose to his scalp.

"Nothing! What is wrong with you, girl? I just washed it and blow-dried it like every morning…"

"Ah, I see" she nodded and stepped back. "Alternate dimension. It must be."

Albus lips were twitching. "You deduced this from the state of Severus' hair?"

"Believe me, you would have, too," she deadpanned,

had me tears leaking from my eyes thanks for sharing and i can't wait for more.

izabella -
KeeperoftheSnoopyDance chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Excellent! I wonder though, is there any chance in this story for HG/SS? I know the pairing for the story is Harry P. & Hermione G., but a girl can hope. I'm just having withdrawal from "When A Lioness Fights" being concluded.
gryphenvoid chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
"The first time with a very old, very cranky lady that had refused to believe Minerva McGonagall was not, in fact, her lost cat,"

My favourite line in this chapter.

I also love how Hermoine concludes an alternate dimension based on Snape's robes and hair :p
ep chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Rori Potter chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
That was brilliant. Update soon.
sweettswetz chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
"You deduced this from the state of Severus' hair?"

"Believe me, you would have, too,"

Hi-la-rious! Looking forward!
speedyc89 chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
O_O I wonder how Harry will react to this completely different Snape. Hilarious btw,lol, it's about time Snape washed his hair. Keep up the awesome writing! I look forward to the next chapter D
StormyFireDragon chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
another interesting chapter i am curious as to what she whispered to dumbles
Ren82 chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
nice start i look forward to reading more.
Erroneously chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Thanks for the update, intriguing - I'm wondering what Hermione told Dumbledore, and how they'll all react to the knowledge of where they came from.
Katieeee chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Another awesome chapter, loving your Severus totally different from the usual one you see. I want to know what Hermione said to ALbus to make him trust her...guess I just have to wait for your next update! Glad you're feeling up to writing again Kate xox
1sunfun chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Interessting story.

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