Wow, this sounds like a brilliant story. I loved 'When A Lioness Fights' and this promises to have a great plot and plenty of humour. The idea of an alternate universe is fascinating, especially one so out of the ordinary that Sirius and Severus would be friends. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, this story seems very promising, can't wait for the next chapter D

You definitely got me intrigued, but I cannot form an opinion from this. How about you submitting more samples for reviewing? ;-)

This looks like the start of an amazong cross dimension story. Will Harry have any kinda sorta half silbings?

I can't wait to read more. I liked the banter between Sev and Sirius.

intriguing first chapter - no Ron, and Neville & Luna involved in the hunt! and the parallel world with Sirius & Severus friends & Severus with Lily - looking forward to more already!

hope both you and your husband are keeping well.

Wheres the other chapter?

Omg bad cliffhanger

Get the next chapter up please.I like the idea of your story

I like the way the starts

Until next time

Gloria

I rarely read HP fic anymore, but seeing as it was yours, I had to take a look. I'm glad I did- I really like the new situation you have set up here. Look forward to more. Who knows? It might get my own muse going in this world again.

And if I didn't say it before, know that you and your husband are in my thoughts and wish you both peace and courage through your trials.

hob

I'm so glad you're on my author alert list or I could have missed this gem of a story. From the snippet I've read you've totally redone the parallel universe angle, and I'm loving it can't wait for more of your story. Do you know if there will be pairings in this story yet? Katie xox