|Reviews for Enslavement|
| Lia Felix chapter 14 . 3/6
UGHHH this story is so good. I'm so so happy that you've updated again, i hope the moving was smooth sailing!
I really hope to see an update soon on this story, as well as your other ones! Eagerly awaiting!
| JK2009 chapter 14 . 3/5
Fascinating story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| T.Ellyh chapter 14 . 3/2
It's so great to see a new chapter after so long. I love this story so much. It's so dark and intense and it's good to see an update. The complexity of the relationship between Culleb and Solona is so amazing and I'm always on the edge of my seat for more. I'm curious to see how their relationship will develop. And I'm so intrigued by the soft spot Cullen seems to have for Solona. Basically I'm just eager for more of these two. Thanks for posting another chapter, I'll be waiting for more!
| OrchidLurver chapter 14 . 3/1
Dear lord I so excited to see this updated. And wow what a powerful and well written chapter. Bravo, I look forward to the rest!
| Dusty Bones chapter 14 . 2/28
I'm so glad that you haven't abandoned this! It's been a long time and even though it was pretty short you managed to completely capture my attention yet again! You handle the delicate nature of this story so well it's amazing. Anyway, I'm so excited for the next chapter!
Have a great day!
| Hr'awkryn chapter 14 . 2/27
This story just gets better and more intriguing with every chapter. Most of the time I can at least guess where the story is going, but with this one I am always left far too curious. I wish we could know what is going on in Cullen's head, just once!
I have probably said it before, but I am really glad that you are continuing this story even though I know you've received criticism for it. It is very well thought-out, and it stands out among other stories like it (in a good way!). Go you.
| kateskates24 chapter 14 . 2/27
Yaaaay for an update! I was worried you had abandoned it!
| Warlock Arkon chapter 2 . 1/1
i have very few times felt such incandescent rage at fictional characters. if it had been an option in game i would have slaughtered the templars during origins just because i read this far into your fic.
Since that was what the story you have written seems to be trying to do i guess thats a ...
...thumbs up maybe?
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/8/2013
This is so amazingly dark, I love this AU! This is chillingly realistic, which just makes it even better. Please keep writing this, I would love to see what happens! :3
| athos-aramis chapter 12 . 7/15/2013
This one of a handful of stories I have actually favorited and was rather put-off by the response you were forced to write. I've seen that you have had many reviewers commenting on SomeStudent and am annoyed enough to join them.
You're story is brilliant, LibraMoon. The real world is a dark, twisted place at times especially when prejudice is involved. You have portrayed nothing that is not in a history textbook (albeit in greater detail), nor have you done anything that isn't already in the game (again, yours containing greater detail). Let's not forget that players have the option of persuading Alistair to have sex with Moragan despite not wanting to for "the sake of their relationship/lives/world". Because he's male maybe we don't see it as such a horrible thing, but he is coerced into sexual acts he originally refuses. Also, the game is rated M, is gory, violent, has cut scenes with sex, and therefore those interested in this fandom will have been exposed to all of those things, found merit in the story, and hence are seeking out your story. I think you do an amazing job of portraying a heroine that is sacrificing herself for others since she lives as a slave in a world that hates her. I think we can all think of points in history where this very thing has happened. Ignoring that this happens by saying it's too violent is really ignorant.
Also, the whole I'm a law student interested in DV...well I'm in forensics and work with homicides nearly everyday. Believe me, LibraMoon, you have yet to portray ANYTHING that is remotely close to some of the messed up things I deal with on a daily basis. I appreciate this story since it's a survival tale, is very sad, and strikes a chord with me. I hope that others that have read beyond the first chapter would be of the same character. You capture the helplessness and despair of those in situations like this and do so like a master. I applaud you for you attention to detail and ability to give us such an un-cliched story of suffering.
Chapter specifics, again very well written and a lot of great emotion.
| Kajataya chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
| lulu560 chapter 13 . 6/15/2013
Please keep updating this spectacular story! I'd love to see how Solona turns everything around for the better!
| Her Eternal Grimoire chapter 13 . 6/11/2013
| OrchidLurver chapter 13 . 6/10/2013
Beautifully written. This chapter is gorgeous! But it ended so suddenly lol. You must love doing this to us :D
| falloutkitten chapter 13 . 6/10/2013
love this story! your so talented, one of the reasons i was drawn to this story was because its dark and gritty like the dragon age world actually is, there's to much "everything works out perfectly" in some of these stories, and this one colors outside the line, was impressed with solona giving it back to cullen, good for her!