|Reviews for Nights Tale|
| Merlenyn chapter 17 . 10/22
Oh noes, he set Remus? XD That's going to be an interesting meeting... and I bet Tonks hasn't had a chance to tell Remus about her meeting with Cadence yet? Hmm... It'll be hilariously awesome though if they get Remus firmly on board with the truth once they get him to sit down and listen... and then he can go back and tell half truths and lies to Dumbles. LOL
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/20
I can't wait to see how the reunion between Cadence and Remus goes! This is such an interesting story!
| yukino76 chapter 17 . 10/17
| Ebenbild chapter 17 . 10/17
Huh? Did they send Lupin?! Sounded like it, somehow...
Not to criticize you, but maybe you should go over the last two chapters again. I was a little confused about who's actually speaking at some parts in those chapters and sometimes there were spelling errors even I caught (I'm talking about me not being a native speaker) like 'and' instead of 'an', 'him' instead of 'his' etc.
Well, back to the story (I hate criticizing, but when I like a story I at least feel obligated to point out some things since correcting them will only better the story in the end...). I loved the plot in the last two chapters. It's nice to have a glimpse at Harry's new/real family (even if I didn't really understand how he's related to Andreas o.O) and to see the new ways of the Death Eaters. I wonder what happened to Yaxley after Harry spoke to Tom...
It's also nice to see that maybe some people of Harry's old crow will follow him on his new side. I definitely thought it funny that Tonks didn't seem to mind Harry calling her by her first name now that he's Lord Black in comparison to her correcting it at any other time... xD
I wonder if she'll find some people who will be willing to change sides with Harry. I also wonder if her mother will return to being a Black...
Well, I guess I'll see.
Continue soon! I'm looking forward to more!
| Tlcatlady chapter 17 . 10/16
I really like that you tied in tonks and gave her a mind of her own. I never liked the thought that Remus would fall for someone without the ability to think for herself. TLC
| daithi4377 chapter 17 . 10/16
Let's hope Tonks talked to Remus before he came to the meeting lol. I think when presented with the truth Remus will side with Harry. I wonder if both Remus and Siriys were memory charmed to forget the fact that Lily was not pregnant and that the boy they kidnapped to be their son never was their son? I'm wondering just how much of a rush Cadence took telling or rather filling in the blanks for Tonks. After losing Siriys I really really hope he doesn't end up losing Remus too.
| mizzrazz72 chapter 17 . 10/16
Poor Remus. He's about to loose his last link to James.
| mizzrazz72 chapter 16 . 10/14
He finally has what was taken from him.
| ORKCHILD chapter 16 . 10/12
I just think of each chapter as a gift that appears in my e-mail when ever they should appear.
| daithi4377 chapter 16 . 10/12
I thought only male basilisk gad the feather? School is out so why does Dumbledore have any say about who or where Severus has dinner? I like the way that he just dismisses the child...that is soooo going to come back and bite him in the arse! The next few chapters should be quite interesting...hopefully Cadence becomes closer to his fathers, he has yearned for family for so long and now he has a large one...is he afraid something will happen that it's too good to be true and it will be all taken away?
| daithi4377 chapter 15 . 10/12
If Rita isn't careful she is going to end up one squashed bug. Well we see now that Fudges idiocy has not lowered if anything it has increased if that's possible. Interesting chapter...somehow I have a feeling Griphook was walking around on tenterhooks for a few moments there in the bank lol.
| yukino76 chapter 16 . 10/11
thanks for the update
| sarahjanecousins2 chapter 16 . 10/11
Awwwwww so sweet.
| Merlenyn chapter 16 . 10/10
Heh, so Cadence was an "illegal" child according to the Ministry's old rules that Salazar totally just shattered when he took over the Wizengamot? Awesome. XD Makes me wonder how many others out there have one or two too many children that'll pop up outta the woodworks now that they're not being restricted? LOL
But aww... kinda a nice chapter (except for the fuming of Dumbles), with Cadence getting some family time and coming up with an idea for them to use to help hide the whole vampire thing with that one family that goofed a hunt up... and then poor Cadence freaking out about how his parents, Severus, and his familiar Korai would react to the truth about what happened to the basilisk from the Chamber... of course Salazar would be sad because he'd had that basilisk for so long, but at the same time, he might even be happy that she's no longer stuck there alone going nuts without family around... if she indeed had started going mad that is. So, is Severus his "one" or something then since vampires don't have mates? lol Since they are awfully drawn to each other... well Cadence sure is drawn to his blood more than others... lol
I wonder what Dumbles is hoping to learn from Severus going off to dinner? And I wonder if he'll go out and investigate the Shack while Sev's off at dinner and get himself cursed by that lovely ring left as a trap? XD And poor Nagini, stuck being a regular snake now... lol
| ORKCHILD chapter 15 . 10/5
Wonderful, I bet 10 of Dumbledor's votes are Harry's