Reviews for Unrequited
Pogonia And Medusa chapter 1 . 6/19
Wonderful story, very true to Severus's character. Do continue it!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20
I usually don't take the time to review but please please please continue this one shot
Phanarah chapter 1 . 1/30
MORE PLEASE, MORE. thank you!
Love2read23 chapter 1 . 1/6
I vote that you continue it. Please?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
I cried. A lot. Please continue!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Maya Angelou passed away, great.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!
LOVES-U-All chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
This is wonderful! :) Please continue.
Montara chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I bet a lot of people are in his situation and will relate to him so I really hope you'll find the time to expand this story! :)
eltseth chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
love it. absolutely love it. shows a new dimension to unrequited love, when you're so far in it it becomes a poisonous part of you that clouds your judgement. very well written :')
and i 100% support this being a multi-chapter fic!
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Please don't leave this story here...it's wonderful, but there isn't enough of it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Please do (after you finish Awkwardness ofcourse)
miss insufferable know it all chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Lovely!
Temporarily Nameless chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Another beautiful Severus/Hermione. Are you trying to make me fall in love with this pairing? Either way, you've succeeded. Thus, yes, you definitely must make a chaptered continuation of this story. You simply must! It would be wonderful if you included Hermione's POV of the events in this one-shot. One more thing, this passage: "which he had been forced to go to regularly as clockwork by his boss ", is confusing. I'd suggest something like: "the Burrow at which he had been forced to go, as regular as clockwork, by his boss". But this is my opinion.
crazyb10 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
YES - Please write more, would love to read what happens next.
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Brilliant! and I loved the ending
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