|Reviews for Ohana|
| JMCP chapter 8 . 8/17/2013
Will there be more? At first I thought Steve was Jacob's father but then a little voice said, "No, he's John McGarrett's." Please keep this going.
| JensensMisses chapter 8 . 12/17/2012
Poor jacob I'm so glad he has Steve to help him. Great story, can't wait for next chapter
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
love it awww now there is a little mcgarrett its soooo cute mmm when are you going to put another chapter
| Craftygirl11 chapter 8 . 5/27/2012
When is the next chapter going to be put up? I loved this one and the one before it. please contiue!
| Zillahwolf chapter 8 . 4/1/2012
Please finish...pretty please? it is so good!
| Kimmeke95 chapter 8 . 3/18/2012
Please continue this story, it is really good! Please?
| lovesanimals chapter 8 . 10/31/2011
Please keep posting to this story! I want to see how it ends!
| Runner043 chapter 8 . 10/27/2011
Just finished reading your story. Very good concept and well written, too bad there was no final chapter to wrap it up.
| McShep01 chapter 8 . 9/17/2011
I've just discovered this story and it is SO good!
I really really LOVE this growing realtionship between Steve and his step-brother and can't wait to see what happens next.
Hope you are going to update soon.
| 2ndstar2daRight2 chapter 8 . 8/30/2011
I really really love this so far! I hope you keep it going for a while (or maybe a sequel just seeing how the relationship between Steve and Jacob grows cause I LOVE it) please update soon (and make your story last FOREVER!
| LisaG16 chapter 8 . 8/30/2011
Ha ha! Danno to the rescue again! YAY! :)
I love the way Steve is bonding to Jacob...now we just have to get Jacob to bond in return. They really need to talk about the father they have in common...and a history of sorrow regarding their mothers. :( That might bring the boy around.
| crokettsgirl chapter 8 . 8/29/2011
This was beautifully done. I love that Danno shot Hesse and not Jacob, saving the kid the pain. That Steve dove on him to sheild him. I also love how you described the dive like in football.
The vulnerable little boy was really well written vulnerable but not quite trusting and scared he was all alone.
And I adored how Steve treated him and knew he couldn't tell Jacob yet about him being his older brother or ask about the beatings. Fantastic. Sue
| Libtech chapter 8 . 8/29/2011
Great story. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
| LisaG16 chapter 4 . 8/29/2011
You scared me for a second when Steve couldn't find Danny. WHEW! And Danny, always the voice of reason...a good balance for Steve.
I also like that Steve acknowledged the death of Danny's friend Pete. I had hoped to find out about the Wiamea incident, too. :(
| LisaG16 chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
BOOM? that's how you end a chapter? that's just cruel! ;)