Reviews for Feeling the Blues
Kensy Echo chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
Wow it's so... deep. So beautiful. Short but enough to show the feeling through the story. RinXLen is so cute! I rarely find this kind of story in this fandom. Really good!
Gibder chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
Now here's a story I don't see too often at all. The feelings and emotions were so genuine, and I guess the only thing I could have suggested was to make the story longer haha.

Anyway, really good job on this one :)
BlackSilveDemonRose chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
This was so sad and cute I loved it! This was an awesome fanfic! 3
Tears Of Glass chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
Best story ever.
TamoraSky chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
it's so cute. I almost started to cry when he started to speak LOVE IT!
dawnfire216 chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
Wow...

This is a really good yet short fic...

I was surprised at the quality!

I like how you made that message at the end too...

I hope that next year in high school all will go well for everyone!
aloof-kokiri chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
Oh poor, sweet Len. This made me sad. I know how he feels. I'm blind and sometimes, I get treated the same way. I need a Rin! I am glad it had a happy ending though. Len and Rin are just too adorable.
Traveling Artist Jay chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
I very much enjoyed reading this. The message was perfect. :)
thejooky13 chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
kawaii~
Argento Cielo chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
Woah.. I must say that it was the best ending ever!

It's not cheesy it just.. Awesome! .

I can feel the characters emotion because it seems so real for me. When Len began to talk, I thought, "Oh God, he's talking!" O.O

And at the end, did he just say that Rin is his 'wife'? I feel happy for them! :')

Can you make the sequel of this story?

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Fave story!

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-Kurara-
unkownauthor1111 chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE IT... IT MAKES ME FEEL SO... SO... I DON'T KNOW... BUT IT FEELS GOOD...SORRY FOR THE CAPS,I AM JUST SO MOVED... PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE LIKE THIS!
3EyedCat chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
This made my heart feel heavy ;_;
convoluted disillusions chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Words can't express everything I'm feeling right now.

Not only is this well-written, but it also speaks of reality itself.

Great job!
Campanella chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
That was... beautiful :)

And today, while I was looking at my youtube subscriptions, I found a song called "Bullying" by Len XD XD
yams are delicious chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
wow! thanks for writing a romantic story on ffn that actually has a meaning! i enjoyed reading this. it was nice and i like how you don't use random japanese in the story, like honorifics. that way, i could actually bear reading it! great job.

just a few tips. instead of saying "Len's POV," you could just use italics like you did in the first chapter. no actual books say "Len's POV" like that, which is why the italics way looks a lot smoother! be sure to always make it italics when it's his POV though, or it looks odd! and watch out for the few typoes, like i think i saw a "freaks" instead of "freak's"

otherwise, nice story! it made me sit down and think, which is rare. :)
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