|Reviews for The Long Road Back|
| DayDreamer077 chapter 28 . 12/20/2011
oh jeez! I forgot how funny you can be with your stories. lol. It's been a while. lol.
| tw200 chapter 49 . 12/20/2011
WOW... another incredibly powerful chapter. I am in awe of your writing most of the time. This is the 49th chapter of the second arc of the Long Road FF. I keep thinking that pretty soon a dud chapter that is pure filler and no substance is just around the corner.. After all how can you keep chapter after chapter going and going and going... So I pose that question to you how on earth do you keep these great chapters going. OK,, if I am fair there are perhaps two chapters in this arch that were pretty much OK when compared to outstanding, amazing, unbelievable but that is a great score, and unbelieveable score. This chapter was fantastic. Sarah ashamed to let Chuck see her as the Enforcer that was great, then calling herself Mrs. Enforcer was precious. Chuck telling Sarah that he would die loving her "no matter what" was as golden of a statement of love as one can think up. Chuck going to bat for Carina with her "love challenge" was sweet. Brigid admitting that she is a little in awe of Chuck was sweet but expected.. Most everyone that hangs around Chuck very long is in awe of him, sort of how I feel about your writing abilities and your imagination. Sooo to wrap up this comment that is a little long and a little sappy ... This story continues to be pretty much off the chart for me. It has all the making of a week long mini-series for cable that I would pay dearly to see. So as far a compliments go that is about as much as there is to offer. Thanks do we get the next chapter for Christmas? I would consider it a great gift. tw
| rphe chapter 49 . 12/20/2011
great chapter. Loved the Mrs Enforcer title, and the "you got me" always prompts a great flashback to that fantastic scene.
but what happens to Carina now - very interested to see how the great seductress will function from here. I suspect she may have to change her operating procedures and take over the recently vacated Miss Enforcer role
| Chkgun93 chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
Wow, another special and great update. Thank you.
| Katsumara chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
Nicely written, Bill. Loving it. :)
| Sarah Sam chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
Carina in love...will wonders never cease. Tis' still the bomb story.
| Xaphyre chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
Carina is going to kill Chuck! hahaha xD love this chapter! can't wait to read more! xoxo ~Paula
PD: just so you know, every chapter I'm on edge waiting for someone to die and for my heart to break T_T don't want anybody to die! 8
| esardi chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
When you initially gave that warning I had envisioned in my mind Sarah taking the shoes off that jerk and going to work on his foot with a hammer. However, I must say that after she kicked him and explained to him that she was going to start cutting of his fingers that worked for me as well.
I never thought of Chuck as a cupid, Ellie must be rubbing off on him. However, McKnight on his side is definitely a plus. Therefore, the fact that Carina might well say to Jeff "I love you" and mean it may work out very well after all. It would be nice if in celebration over the expected demise of the LOG in the show, if you could find it in your heart to update again this week! (LOL)
| Paladinobr chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
Very good chapter, :) Sarah and Bub was awesome, hehehhe, he deserved everything. I'm wonder how Carina is going to tell him that she loves him and mean it,lol. Waiting for the next chapter.
| uplink2 chapter 49 . 12/19/2011
Another fun one Bill. Can't wait till we get to the conclusion. Thanks for making my monday that much better.
| rphe chapter 48 . 12/14/2011
great chapter. enjoy the way you write Chuck clamly resolving the crisis, and leading to the slow realisation of everyone else about the role he can play. also got to confess to be looking forward to the inevitability of the 2x4's demise, although to be fair he's a more credible villain here that I have thought him to be on the show to date. anyway, its always enjoyable to see his downfall sign-posted well in advance
| doc2or chapter 48 . 12/14/2011
Glad to see Sarah's okay and they are still on track. So Ellie is pregnant, liked the way you wrote that scene. You are really building up the anticipation for the exciting action, getting hard to be patient waiting for what's to come, thanks Bill.
| Sarah Sam chapter 48 . 12/13/2011
Good chapter Bill. Love this cool and calm Chuck.
| Katsumara chapter 48 . 12/13/2011
Nicely done, Bill!
| wassupchuck chapter 48 . 12/13/2011
Nicely done. A little angst, with sugary goodness throughout. Thank you.