Reviews for Into Oblivion: Nightmares Of The Virtual World
XXXXAnimeXXLuverXXXX chapter 6 . 9/6/2011
Wow, I wasn't expecting that. XD I really like this story so far, I hope you can update it soon.
sherabo chapter 6 . 6/21/2011
WOW.. . Didn't see that wall! Well I thought it, but not as you wrote it ... this is hot yet very compassionate...I like this verison of Seto's lusty outbreak... thanks for the pleasure of sneak previews, the joy of beta work, but the end is still a shock. Ok so is this love or lust or just plain healty sexxxxxx..
sherabo chapter 5 . 6/21/2011
You probe into Seto mind, I find that blindfold truly difficult to bare, that has to be a living hell for Seto, yet he shows compassion for someone other that Moka, interesting your train of thought. Will Seto give up hope, yet his strenght lies in Mokuba. I really love this story... Who is that naked boy hehehehehe ... well can't help but think the worst... Love it !
sherabo chapter 4 . 6/21/2011
Its true I am your beta, but reading your final revision on the net blows me away. So Seto is in the dark naked with a witty little vision of Mokuba, what is that twisted little mind of yours thinking... Mr Ice is going to have a meltdown... on my.. I love it. I've never seen Seto so helpless yet you've given him a ray of hope so we are hanging in there with him I love this chapter it has a lot of depth... keep up the good work...
sherabo chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
It's odd but the title of this chapter is so mysterious and a bit sexy, like Seto's, yeah way off base with that thought. But Seto reasoning is so classic I love this chapter, you bring the reader right inside this world I love it... So will he reason his self out of this? Great chapter...
TwitterPater chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Aw poor Seto! Keep going! I can't wait to find out what happened to Mokuba!
cookies111 chapter 4 . 5/22/2011
aww, i like this chapter. it's so sweet~~~
cookies111 chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
I wanna know what happened to mokie! Aww, I feel so bad for that little boy. Glad u updated...now hurry up and do it again! (jk :D)
Dark-Phoenix22 chapter 2 . 5/16/2011
I just had to point out an error in physics in your chapter.

The bike could not "rear up on its back tire from the force" of its brakes. The front brakes of any vehicle do 70% of the stopping. A vehicle would only rear up backwards if it was taking off. Slamming the brakes on will make the bike lean onto the FRONT tire. And on a bike, would probably have thrown them off or buried the front fork in the pavement.

Good story though, I like the way you write :)
sherabo chapter 2 . 4/23/2011
my heart is pounding , the brothers are connected and the fight is on ! love it
sherabo chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Really great start makes you want to watch the anime again. Love Seto as a bad ass brother... keep going.
Seto K4iba1 chapter 2 . 4/16/2011
A very interesting change so far to the virtual world saga. I look forward to your continued installments.
cookies111 chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
Omg whats gonnna happen! Gah! I wants morez :P