|Reviews for Titans Phantom|
| Johny Blade chapter 40 . 3/15
Heh. Heh. This chapter was great! Like Always Danny is just clueless. Please update soon!
| Ms.awesome.562 chapter 34 . 3/12
w wh what? you're going to kill Danny! okay problably not (I hope) I gotta keep reading!
must. figure. out. what's. going. to. happen. next!
but dammit I have stuff to do in half an hour NOOOO!
| Dragon Skellington chapter 40 . 3/8
Hi! This has been awesome! I love the way you have mixed the characters and timelines into a really compelling story that is close enough to the original tv show to give an indication of what should happen next but adds enough new content that it's a whole other experience. you have done an amazing job and I can't wait to see more. Especially the season 4 focus on Raven. But, please, take your time. Life sucks sometimes and it gets hard to write but what comes out at the end is always better if it isn't rushed! *leaves a tin of cookies*
| Dragon Skellington chapter 2 . 3/2
This. Is. Beautiful! I love both of these shows so much and this is so far blending them together really nicely. I will definitely keep reading! Nice job! *leaves a tin of cookies*
| No.311 chapter 40 . 2/13
I'm so tuned!
| Guest chapter 40 . 2/11
| goodgirl275 chapter 40 . 2/10
Great job! If you can't write, it's fine. Real life always comes first. When you do write: Keep up the great work! I love your Headcannon/AU. :)
| Nazran chapter 40 . 2/10
Hopefully this will maintain some level of structure as I write it.
As I've read this over the past two weeks or so I've been pleasantly surprised. I have looked into this particular crossover many times over the years and somehow missed your work. That being said I like the story a lot. It is complex and less derived than some. I quite enjoy it. The complexities of other including other DC arches are well formulated and specifically I liked the sequence of Blackfire and Starfire in the betrothal chapter(s). Raven's burgeoning attraction to Danny as well is entertaining and I am curious if that is to be more developed beyond the dancing around the issue. I personally dislike Valerie as a character in canon and was relieved when there was no further relationship formed between her and your Danny.
Criticisms however are a few. I've definitely noticed that in quite a few chapters there are small lapses in tense or grammar, though they are often inconsequential it can throw one for a loop. Other times the thought process can be a little confusing and it detracts from the point you might be trying to make or the plot point that is supposed to be realized. Other than that I don't i noticed anything particularly significant: Or at least if I did it, has slipped my mind.
In the end I hope you continue to update the story often. I might suggest finding a beta perhaps?
And as an afterthought I watched the Forces of Nature of episode and look at the flame monster's forehead. When I read you A/N my first thought was the symbol was 火 the Kanji for fire. However it appeared to be ち which is simply the 17th character of the Japanese alphabet. In Japanese chi or ち has few different meanings with the same spelling in English/Latin alphabet but different Kanji. There is earth, ground, or place which is 地 or blood (血) or wisdom/intellect (智 / 知). So really it might not mean anything or it could have something to do with the DC verse and Trigon. Or it could be another Asian language entirely. Just food for thought.
| newboy chapter 40 . 2/9
I am relieved that this was a definite diverge from teen titans canon. About the next chapter, once danny learns that the gas triggered by slade could only have happened after slade was supposed to have died. I can definitly see danny going to his supernatural contacts to see if slade is coming back in some form, out of all people he knows that it would be possible. He might even discover the existence of trigon long before the titans do in canon.
I can also see danny using different contacts, both living and dead to try to find out more about slade's past after this next chapter. I have researched slades past as deathstroke the terminator, and his youth is somewhat similar to danny's, both have been fighting in war when they were still minors, Slade wilson back when he enlisted in the war with north korea by lieing about his age, then volinteering for an experiment that enhanced his body, he actually does have some similarities to danny.
Even if danny never does find out more about slade, I can definitly see slade finding out more about danny, through trigon. Trigon at least probably knows more about danny's exploits in the ghost zone than slade does, danny's defeat of Pariah Dark alone would be enough to catch Trigons attention. Slade might very well recognize the similarities between danny and himself back when he was young. That might make any future interaction between them interesting.
| caly512 chapter 40 . 2/7
i really like this
| Yijasha chapter 40 . 2/5
I really like how you've built on Danny's original character designs/powers. How you've made his abilities age along side him and his knowledge of his powers grow as well. I feel as though your story is well balanced and fairly logical, humorous and in character. I really love the work you do and hope you won't let previous (English challenged/immature) reviewers get you down. That is uncalled for.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/4
what the hell you dont understand the way danny's powers work do you? Ive been bearing through it all but this is the srraw rhat broke the cammels back dude, first you gave danny all those injuries whereas his ectoplasmic fused cells HEAL him how do you think he got up from an ass whooping from paraiah dark so quickly another thung, if danny runs out of energy he reverts to human yet you had him in ghost form when the puppet king stole his half that practically was phantom WTF!? Then he's unconsious for two straight days in the infirmary ARE YOU SERIOUS!? Why didnt he revert to human he clearly lost energy, i like you story and all but i dislike the fact you bend truths just to keep danny's identity
| kidcraxy chapter 40 . 1/27
i enjoyed the story so far. its has its own twists and turns but its really good. i like that you added the justice league to the story and also that u updated again.
| Cf96 chapter 40 . 1/24
Just found this and I like it keep up the good work
| j158n chapter 40 . 1/24
The gem part was a bit random but probably becomes important later, starfire's story was sad and the twin brother excuse was clever, good not as good as earlier chapters, but I still liked it