Also, I hope if this story does continue that Danny and Raven get together soon.

Been over a year since this amazing story was updated, I hope we get a new chapter someday soon.

This was an outstanding story.

Awesome story

Nice! can't wait for more!

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Hey welcome back! Glad to see this gem of a story still kicking, im definitely hype for the next chapter especially since the way you storytell and compose all the characters fit extremely well, I definitely can’t wait to see Danny’s reaction on going through his coronation.

Expectations subverted. Thank the lord

Wonder how many chapters ill be reading through till Danny finds out Slade just lied about the probes? Could be real but the odds are just…

I’ve never been so happy to see a story update! I’ve always loved this fix and I’ve reread it several times through the years. It’s a comfort to me at this point. It really is a beautiful work of passion. I’m grateful for all the work and dedication, while I’m very excited for the next chapter I don’t want to pressure you to do anything that no longer sparks joy for you.

ugh the English is getting worse and making it harder to understand what the fuck is going on.

if you are gonna go back and edit the first few chapters you need to do the rest, otherwise you get people who stop reading when the quality drops off the cliff of your edits.

and the pacing still sucks. pick a damn speed. not that it matters this shit is old and completed bleh

... why did cyborg ask someone where the Titans were if he had their tracking beacons?...
maaan this has alot of strange logic moments

... why did cyborg ask someone where the Titans were if he had their tracking beacons?...

maaan this has alot of strange logic moments.

also the pacing is all over the place.

... Danny's reasoning for "payback" is really really really shallow. like I don't even know why he's doing it. is Robin special to him? gay lover? little brother? or just a guy on a super hero team that he supposedly despises. if it's the last one then he has no reason to give a shit other than rescue him on basic moral principles. the "payback" shouldn't have even been a thought in his mind.

rescue him and go back to his shop. the "payback" is just forced by the author to forward the plot in view of the main characters perspective. there is legitimately no reason why he goes over there. that's just shitty writing to show how the Titans get back into the tower.

I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.

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