Reviews for Orphanage
tinttloo010102 chapter 4 . 6/9
hey
hey hey

its nearly been a year that ive been waiting for you to update T_T Plez hurry, we miss you ):
Selassia chapter 4 . 3/17
I love this story! LOVE!
May I translate it into polish? Pls?
Enigma07 chapter 4 . 1/21
Just plain wonderful. Beautifully written. One scene flows smoothly into another-Update soon!
John chapter 4 . 12/19/2014
You said it would come up soon and it's been months. Please continue!
J Raven chapter 4 . 11/19/2014
AWWWWWW- wait GILAN OMFG STAHP *throws random stuff* GILAN! GILAA-!

*sees you* oh hi I didn't see you there.

Sooo it was awesome. Updaate! (Y'know, if you feel like it... I know how hard it is when you don't want to update something when people want you to ')

Except... I love Will/Halt NO GILAN! However, that DOES make it awesome... The love triangle is cool. I looove it! Awesome writing. And, ...er... description... ahaha.

In all seriousness it's awesome. Update if ya want, no pressure
Raven
Guest chapter 4 . 10/10/2014
Keep going
Alex The Rogue chapter 4 . 9/9/2014
Gods, I can't wait til Halt starts flirting with Will, or something like that...Goddess, you manage to make Will so sexy! But Halt is infinity to the infinite power super sexy!
AER
Hi chapter 3 . 7/14/2014
Your a really good writer I want an account but I can't.
hi chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
Whats a rotary cake?
hi chapter 4 . 7/7/2014
I love the part with will saying " whats wrong with my current attire?"
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2014
Whats a rotary cake? When do halt and will do it? Ive read the story a couple tomes now( well not a couple) and it goes to chapter 4 and there are only so many good fanfics about them with a good story and plot. FYI your one of them whose really good.
I heart vamps chapter 4 . 6/22/2014
Please update soon
FiliKili chapter 4 . 6/17/2014
Please please please update! I love this so much!
Mizuki 8D chapter 4 . 5/4/2014
Sexy Morning wake up call :)
taylor and geni chapter 3 . 3/12/2014
fuck bro FINISH THIS WE ARE DYING! PLEASE
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