Reviews for Phoenix
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 25 . 4/22
Okay, so the major problem with this story, though I really enjoy it, is the massive inconsistencies! I'd believe you if you said you switched writers 30 times in this! You have to note down your facts if you want to have a good story. Write down who's who, their backstory, how everyone met, each and every detail that you choose! Because at some point in this story, Kurt mentioned how he met Artie at the hospital, then he magically forgets? If he actually had DID or something, it would make sense that the trauma-related alter would hold the memory of his mom's death, closing it off from Kurt, but really, it's just one of many of the character/plot inconsistencies.
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 21 . 4/22
... Okay, that chapter got a little weird in the last paragraph or so...
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 20 . 4/22
First of all, *glares*, it's definitely PUCKURT... Sorry, had to say it :D. I know the story is long finished, so my feedback won't help it much, but I think you should let the songs speak for themselves a bit more, as opposed to writing these huge supporting paragraphs between them that evaluate the character's feelings. I used to do it too, but it's a habit that isn't great for a story. Just some food for thought.
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 19 . 4/22
... Is he forgiving Burt just like that? I feel like sometimes your characters can have some... inconsistencies... One minute they're being assholes and hate each other, the next they're all happy families? He can't just forget what Burt did...
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 4 . 4/21
Huh... Artie's line at the end... I wonder if there's anything more to that. Glad they're all writing to them. And that Sam was absent, not a douche :D
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 2 . 4/21
Okay... Little more of Burt... I'm hoping that the situation is cleared up and Carole finds out and divorces his sorry ass. Hitting your kid is never okay, no matter what fucking happened. Also, little confused about Finn...
Lauren's Glee Stories chapter 1 . 4/21
What the freaking fuck did I just read...? Did Burt really...? NO. No, he did. You know, when you first mentioned 'Da-' in the first story I thought the implication was Burt, but then it was Karofsky... Turns out maybe I wasn't too far from the truth..
Gracieling chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
Do I catch a rent reference?
Master Gaga chapter 23 . 4/10/2012
Taylor Swift is great, and so are you
Master Gaga chapter 22 . 4/10/2012
Music choices are great! You're great
Master Gaga chapter 21 . 4/10/2012
I LOVED Puck's promise
Master Gaga chapter 20 . 4/10/2012
So fun!
Master Gaga chapter 17 . 4/10/2012
Good God! Your story is so wonderful!
Master Gaga chapter 16 . 4/10/2012
Beautiful. The Kurt-Santana relationship is beautiful.
Master Gaga chapter 15 . 4/10/2012
Cool chap
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