|Reviews for Peter's Game|
| Jessicasaurus chapter 5 . 4/21/2011
That was so short! Too short. The fangirls want more. And not much happened. Make more happen, please!
Tell me when you have a new story out, I want to read it!
| Jessicasaurus chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
Hmm... I skipped the sex part cause I always feel awkward reading that kind of stuff, but the rest seems good. I want more!
3 (no homo),
| Jessicasaurus chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I'm interested, I never see stories like this. This is really well written and interesting, and Peter's in character, which I love. There's a couple spelling mistakes, just use Microsoft Works/Word or Open Office, provides it for free.
I like the character Missy a lot, she seems so nice! I love the line "But I think we should put a chastity belt on him", that made me crack up.
I LOVE DAVID. MUST SEE MORE OF HIM. Yeah, I know he got a sentence, but I still love him anyway. And actually, my friend and I created a character named Bertha who's also really tough. She has a BF named Sasha.
Well, I'm going to read chapter 2!