Reviews for An Oldfashioned Husband
Just an opinion chapter 16 . 3/3/2013
I feel kind of like Edward is too mean to Bella and Renesmee. Kind of annoyed with them all the time. Maybe you should address that in another story ;)
Pig 828 chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
"Bella fell into the bed and was smothering her laughter with the covers."
Kindly change it to:
Bella fell into the bed and was smothering her laughter with a rain of kisses on her Renesmee & pressing her Rene with her. She made Rene hairs & started walking with Rene in arms.
OPOSOJOJ chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
liza chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
oh, i see. you went with them still being vampires. well, it's a great plot, just wish they were human.
LIZA chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
not liking that they have a daughter already but it's a good story.

please update!
Dixie.f.9 chapter 14 . 9/27/2012
Oh I love it. "" The Cullen Corporal Creed, also known as the Young Vampire Attitude Adjustment campaign."
Natt.B chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
wtf was that? I like how you write but... the whole family wanting him to hit her listening to it? and they think it's normal? why the fuck should she listen to him and where did he got the premission to hit her when she doesn't do as he says? this is really sick!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/4/2012
Disturbing, only a pervert coul like it
MockaGirl5 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
That is so sexist, Edward is the one that needs a beating, not Bella she doesn't need to be allowed anywhere!
mschris44 chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
Pretty good so far!
TheLadyKT chapter 16 . 7/4/2012
justginger chapter 16 . 7/4/2012
loved it
DeeplyStained chapter 11 . 6/30/2012
laughed at the no that does not make you Jesus lol Bella is such a sluty bit h
DeeplyStained chapter 6 . 6/30/2012
Bella's a bit better..
DeeplyStained chapter 5 . 6/30/2012
I want to slam her was into the wall Bella's a but h
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