|Reviews for An Oldfashioned Husband|
| TheEasternWind chapter 14 . 12/9/2017
I can't say that I agree with non-consensual corporal punishments. But the way Bella behaves I would have expected a huge verbal (!) argument...because sure. She doesn't need permission to go anywhere but she can't endanger the entire family. Vampires have been killed for less exposure to humans..
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
thank you for your time and talent
| Anissa0012 chapter 15 . 7/31/2017
I can't write what I'm thinking because I'm sure there's a bot somewhere waiting to pounce and censor, but...wow. I've been re-reading my favorite authors and I can tell I'm just going to be very busy with all your stories..._again_! Gotta make sure the roomies are out next time I read this one, tho, whew! *grin* Superb writing, flawless characterization, mood, timing, humor. Really stupendous. You've already inspired me with one story (A Battle at Sea), and I reread this one in order to set the scene before I reread Artful Dodger so I can re-awaken the mischievous Esme in my own perculating stories. Thank you so much, Elle. I hadn't remembered how steamy AofH was, but I am really glad for the ride as I study your style!
| Anissa0012 chapter 6 . 7/31/2017
...'most unconventional practice for Lent'
ROFLMAO! You'll be the death of me, ed01! *holds aching stomach, hyperventilating with mirth*
I am laughing as hard at this re-reading as I did the first time. And the second.
Jasper and Alice are great. I love your reasoning with Jasper's rethinking Bella's relationship with Trouble.
| Lilcristal chapter 8 . 7/27/2017
Hi,jake st wanted to say I love your story although I think that you should have some more bedroom scenes, I'm only at chapter 8 so I'm still not sure what will happen but I just felt like informing you.
I love your story it's really good, and I can see you put a lot of work into it. Job very well done!
| Just an opinion chapter 16 . 3/3/2013
I feel kind of like Edward is too mean to Bella and Renesmee. Kind of annoyed with them all the time. Maybe you should address that in another story ;)
| Pig 828 chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
"Bella fell into the bed and was smothering her laughter with the covers."
Kindly change it to:
Bella fell into the bed and was smothering her laughter with a rain of kisses on her Renesmee & pressing her Rene with her. She made Rene hairs & started walking with Rene in arms.
| OPOSOJOJ chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
| liza chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
oh, i see. you went with them still being vampires. well, it's a great plot, just wish they were human.
| LIZA chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
not liking that they have a daughter already but it's a good story.
| Dixie.f.9 chapter 14 . 9/27/2012
Oh I love it. "" The Cullen Corporal Creed, also known as the Young Vampire Attitude Adjustment campaign."
| Natt.B chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
wtf was that? I like how you write but... the whole family wanting him to hit her listening to it? and they think it's normal? why the fuck should she listen to him and where did he got the premission to hit her when she doesn't do as he says? this is really sick!
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/4/2012
Disturbing, only a pervert coul like it
| MockaGirl5 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
That is so sexist, Edward is the one that needs a beating, not Bella she doesn't need to be allowed anywhere!
| mschris44 chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
Pretty good so far!