Reviews for Critical Eye
tinyinara chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Ooh I love this! Especially the description of the pictures Neal took! Great fic! :)
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
i'm sure neal will find a way to retrieve those pics, just to find the note attached to the last one...
great story,
love your eye for detail here!
foamskyandsea chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Great job; I adored this!
Leverte chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
That's gorgeous! I actually can see all photos that Neal have done. I also think that such situation might take place in their past, cause their relations really full of passion and emotions.

Imazing! Thank you so much!
mam711 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Very nice. I really like the descriptions of all the pictures Neal took of Peter, and can imagine how fun it was for him to take and send them.
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
love it!
collarchick chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
This is genius! Love the way you portray them both... and especially Neals class in not rubbing Peters actions in his face. Cant wait for the next chapter ;)