|Reviews for Honour Bound|
| SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 20 . 1/7
Nice work, would have loved to see all the loose ends tied, but that is how real life is, so it does make it more realistic
| 1sunfun chapter 20 . 11/18/2013
A really nice, interessting, exciting and original story.
| 1sunfun chapter 16 . 11/18/2013
Wasnt it said in an earlier chapter, that the houseelves coul also pop silently and only made a noise to anounce their arrivel, I think it was when they learned that Harry had been resorted and that they had to leave their room in Gryffindortower.
| Diddleymaz chapter 20 . 10/28/2013
Excellent. I think it's a satisfactory end too
| TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 20 . 10/20/2013
Truly stupendous! Shame about a lack of sequel, but I understand about losing the muse and better this than what multiple tv series have done, dragging it on too long and killing the love :) Thank you for sharing another masterpeice!
| TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
Crazy Ron's temper almost killed Harry- but somehow strangely makes sense... Yet there might still be something there to keep them as friends, Which i kinda like, as much Ron bashing as I've seen in fics [he was a loyal pal who repeatedly risked his life, even as young as 11/12]. Hermiones horrible bias though... go figure! And booo.! Fascinating as ever though!
| TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 8 . 10/20/2013
Hermione, that meddling witch! ooooh... argh... lol. But yay for Lilorienne! Awesome twist!
| TheLions'PaleProtector chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
I know it's only three chapters in, but i couldn't wait to submit my first review :) Not only was this idea refreshingly original to me, but very well written! I absolutely love it! Instant favorite!
| FireAndPowder chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
I'm going to favorite this because I really did like and enjoy the story. The development between the two was great and I'm glad it took time for them to get together. That being said I'm incredibly disappointed that this was left unfinished and I wish there had been something in the summary detailing that so I was prepared for that ahead of time.
| Sheri Contrary chapter 20 . 6/14/2013
Hmm. Seemed to end abruptly. Would have been nice to see a more thought out ending. I get that you "lost your muse," but...not really fair to those who took the time to read it all. Where's Old Moldy Voldy and the Death Eaters? What happened with Lucius Malfoy...why didn't we see him again? And so on. Also, Harry's a bit of a brat, yeah? I mean...not a bit...he's a HUGE brat! And a brat with power...not a good combination. *sigh* Couldn't stand Hermione in this, but I'm glad you had Ron come around. I hate it how so many writers make Ron horrible...even JKR did it in parts and that's just not very good for a best mate, you know? Your Hermione though...grr! What an ignorant bitch! And Dumbledore. Hmm. People love to hate (and bash) him, but that just seems wrong. JKR clearly adored the man and so many people turn him into the great evil. Frustrating!
Okay...so...overall, this was written quite well. I do have one issue. There is a difference between "a while" (two words) and "awhile" (one word)...you don't seem to know the difference. Awhile (one word) means "for a while" (the "for" is implied), so...
I will be gone for a while. (correct)
I will be gone awhile. (correct)
I will be gone for awhile. (incorrect - this is incorrect because basically the word "for" is in the sentence twice, as "awhile" means "for a while")
Can't think of more to say right now. Hmm.
| sassiecassiegirl1234567890 chapter 9 . 4/22/2013
I just wanted to say that great minds think alike, I have always when putting myself in the HP series that I was a child of the founders and was put to sleep till I found my soul mate or rather sensed him in the school. I just thought it cool that you made Harry out to being a child of the founder and in a bubble till he was found.
| loveiaoy chapter 20 . 4/7/2013
There was a lot of loose ends but oh well it was a good story nonetheless
| Raiderhater13 chapter 20 . 4/4/2013
just finished rereading this story for the forth time each time i get a better understanding thank you just one question about regurading the story Unbiten is there much chanch you will write and finish it any time soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Although the story is well written and developped-until the end, that is- i really liked how harry has not changed his willingness to help anyone, even draco who was rumoured to be a death eater, and turned the slaverybond into one of marriage and love. However, Harry is powerful on his own, he did not have to be the son of the founders, and merlin andbe able talk to hogwarts and descendant of royalty etc, i found a way too powerful Harry to be overkill, which is quite unfortunate because it would have been a favourite
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
slave... the word that just steers people with any humanity away. In case you haven't heard Lincoln freed the slaves!