|Reviews for Kingdom of Rust|
| Nicoconsd chapter 13 . 1/16/2012
Only one more chapter? Oh no! :( I am not ready for it to be over... :)
Damn when Edward had that gun to his mouth I could totally understand why he wanted to do it but I was all No Edward don't do it! I am so glad she got him to change his mind and I can't wait to see how they handle the next step.
| Nicoconsd chapter 12 . 1/16/2012
Oh damn! So the entire time I hear the clinking I am all screaming at my computer "Edward you ding dong that is someone down in the basement trying to get your attention!" I swear I wanted to smack him so hard through the screen!
And then! Alice all strung up, I didn't realize Edward was special ops and then how he killed Jasper and Emmett was just damn awesome. I love it when went all primal and just took them out smooth deathly it was awesome and kinda hot... :) hehe I can't help it that stuff gets me going! :)
But then poor Alice! Now they are all dead but him and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens, Will they leave? Stay in the house? How will Bella take it all and what will Edward do I have a feeling he is gonna be kinda lost for a while. Oh I am so excited I have another chapter to read! :)
| alc219 chapter 13 . 1/13/2012
HOLY SHIT I did not see that coming AT ALL! But I love this story and can't wait for more! xx
| Whitney Love chapter 13 . 1/10/2012
Amazing and a pleasure to read. Love it.
| seekerharmoney chapter 13 . 1/10/2012
thanks good chapater
| Shamatt0403 chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
My heart just breaks for Alice. He's going to protect her. I can not wait for the conclusion. This has turned out to be more than I could ever have expected. Thank you.
| Denny52 chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
How painful for him. How will he ever get over loosing Alice. Glad Bella stopped him from blowing his brains out. This was such a good story. So raw and expressive and suspenseful. Great job. Hoping there's some peace in the end.
| Kdc2239 chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
Wow! That was an amazing chapter. Thank you for writing
| Atinaread chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
Thnaks, thank so much for this wondeful chapter! You write so well! Still I can not believe this story will end... really, I love it. Anxiously waiting for the next ... thanks again :) ... xo
| Rochelle Allison chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
omg that was intense. this story is so fantastic. it's never enough, and yet, it's perfectly enough. i love the dark edges, the creepiness. it's so different.
| Mgonz595 chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
| voyanisen chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
I wondered if she had had her tongue cut out, and that's why she didn't speak. I don't know if I would be able to forgive her for what happened to Alice, knowing she could have said something. I know she was helpless, but damn. She's lucky he feels responsible for her.
Amazing update. The aftermath of the previous chapter, and his rage, desire to end it all, viscerally affected me. My stomach is still hurting and queasy, although that may be because I had to re-read the previous chapter for some clarity. That was a gut-wrenching chapter! whew. I'm hopeful for the next chapter, for the first time.
Thank you for this incredible story!
| Tammygrrrl chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
Loved the update.
| auroraboralis chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
Killer chapter! I'm so impressed! Some amazing writing here!
I'm so happy you posted!
| Livie79 chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
This chapter broke my heart, I could literally feel his pain and his struggle. Oh and Bella, God while I get it, her silence, I wanted to shake the shit out of her! But this chapter was so good and I can't wait to see what's next! Excellent job!