|Reviews for Kingdom of Rust|
| Equivamp chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
this is just one of those things i havent a clue how to respond to... so many things happening in that little space of time. awesome work.
| seekerharmoney chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
thanks good chapter
| hell1sempty chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
Really liking this story! Please update soon :D
| KatHat chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
For the cars to be rusted, which takes a long time, it must have been years since whatever happened. Interesting that he was military and that people would have such an adverse reaction. Even more questions arise as to how the military fell apart.
So he's sleep deprived and exhausted, probably dehydrated and hungry, injured and cold... not good. At least he got a little sleep, but at what expense? It sounds like he's about to have to fight.
| KatHat chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I saw the teaser on ADF and was almost too nervous to check it out. Lions Eat Lambs affected me for DAYS after I read it and I didn't know if I could take something like that again. But, I'm brave!
The part with his daughter was so touching, yet full of despair. It does give some hope that things are better, they are able to find a home and that they are home together with her mother.
I'm wondering how he met Alice and why he feels such a bond to her. Being so sleep deprived that your eyes are burning is not good. The descriptions of how quiet it was and the sounds of the grass blowing was so unsettling.
Fantastic first chapter!
| LindyP chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Wow! What a way to leave us hanging! Looking forward to the next post. This story is excellent!
| scrosby66 chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Looks like a great story! Thanks for writing!
| TheGodsCanDance chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
| Shamatt0403 chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
This is so exciting. I am so curious to where it is going. It is completely off the track which makes it so interesting. Great chapter!
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
See, you unsettle me and I still come back. You got mojo, chicita.
'Fessing up to addictive behaviours here but where really good fanfic is on offer, it matters not that it might push at my comfort zones a little. If the writing is great (or the smut factor high), I can't stay away.
This is so very, very good. Fast paced, unsettling, menacing, adrift, unanchored.
Urgh! Grat stuff.
Happy dance to see the update in my inbox and you're right. Clarification will be provided . . . gradually.
Thanks for the update. And thanks for the share : )
| JulzIzMe chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Glad to see that you are writing again. I've never failed to like story you've written and can tell this one will be the same. Miss HOTH but this will be a nice consolation prize :D
| Dementia is Reality chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Oh man Raggdoll! That was bloody awesome! I'm so glad I haven't peaked at the teasers on ADF yet. I wanted everything to be a surprise.
I love the dad/daughter relationship. She so has daddy wrapped around her little hands.
I can't wait for more. Loving the tortured Edward! XD
| Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Such an intriguing start! I'm a sucker for darkness in fic, and I love this already, there are so many hints of despair and I can't wait to find out what the deal is.
I loved this: "The glow of the lantern guides me, although I don't need it; the moon is full tonight." Our first hint that not all is at it seems.
And this: "I take a much-needed breath to soothe the knot that forms in my stomach before I begin the story. I've killed a hundred men without a second thought, but I can't tell a story?" I can't wait to find out what drives a man like him.
And this: "Can I change it? Can I change the ending and leave out all the details that haunt me so?" I guess that I'm left with a feeling of hope even through those statements that hint at absolute desolation, because in the end, here he is, telling his child a story, with her mother nearby.
Very much looking forward to more, thanks for writing!
| Shamatt0403 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I knew it would be awesome and it's only just begun. I can't wait to read the rest. Your imagination leaves me speechless. Thank you!
| lizf22 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
so dark and mysterious with an edge of desperate! looking forward to this very much!