|Reviews for No, no you go first|
| i'm iam chapter 9 . 3/14
the story has a good start but it is getting a bit weak. astrid is doing pretty much everything hiccup was supposed to. she even seems to be bonding to toothless more. i hope it improves but if it doesn't i am going to move on. i don't see the point of a story where the main character does nothing and someone else does everything. astrid might as well be the main character at this point
| i'm iam chapter 1 . 3/14
damn this is much better then i thought it would be
| KasumiKeiko chapter 23 . 12/21/2016
Too bad this seems abandoned
| Anonymous chapter 19 . 8/24/2016
The waking of Chiefs was awesome!
| Drago829 chapter 23 . 3/31/2016
So, I know it may be weird getting this but when will we get more?
| A'stories10 chapter 23 . 2/5/2016
Very interesting story I hope you find the inspiration to continue the story it is really good though I'm confused if astrid gets toothless then who does hiccup have?
| Shawn.17Frost chapter 23 . 2/1/2016
Could you please continue ... this story is awesome!
| Rainbow Awesome Dash chapter 23 . 8/29/2015
Your an amazing writer so please update this extremely soon!
| ivanganev1992 chapter 23 . 8/24/2015
That was pretty good idea Hicup . And strong poison to add in the monster's food is eel . Even more toxic then the blue oleander that killed immediately the heavy wounded monster mountain sized.
And who would be Astrid's winged partner another madder ? Or night fury ?!
Does the gronkle felt connection with anyone . Fishlegs fits to it .
Does Tooth found other dragon from his breed /kind .Or his love?
| ivanganev1992 chapter 22 . 8/24/2015
Wasn't it Hiccups' night fury ? Or they simply share it/him .
And who will be Astrid's ?Does Stoic chose already Hookfang but it sounds strange when mostly it was related for the nightmare not a nadder . And maybe as the tiny claws similar to the NF for writing and grabbing things because it was done in other stories from teror pack .
And weapons dipped in eel blood would be deadly poisonus for the dragons as I knew . Maybe the gigantic horrific creature as well.
| ivanganev1992 chapter 20 . 8/24/2015
Fishlegs was curious and open minded until something turn him into powerful brutal fighter but he prefers pease and pacifist to be timid so it should be some of the dragons who match with that as I know Meatlung/Horrorcow the gronckle is a match . Snotlout lost his potenual part but it could be other one .
As for Camy and the other teens maybe with more allies from dragon's side .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 19 . 8/24/2015
So here is the basic weaponry but knowing Hiccup the Inventor he could add or create his own weapon or add modifications to some of those .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 18 . 8/24/2015
Hiccup is pretty light but Astrid would be heavy .
And is that sword Freya magical enchanted? Inflaming or something when are red the runes of the sword ? And what happened to Hiccup's light twin swords?
| ivanganev1992 chapter 14 . 8/23/2015
It was that or risking the whole operation and with those thick headed with rashly conclusions and superstitious the other way may become as bad as originally happened .
But it deeply hurts the loss of that soul which could be saved.
| ivanganev1992 chapter 13 . 8/23/2015
Why not upgrade the prosthesis as well because it's weakness is the problem because it's flammable and fragile so that would be perfect copy of the original tail fin .