|Reviews for Before the Dawn|
| Maebynotsoclever chapter 24 . 6/4/2011
I never thought that old Hermione would meet Molly and Arthur. I hope nothing happens to her. Sorry if I seem to dumb, but what's the point in Hermione helping them if she can't change anything? I don't get it. I want to kill Dumbledore when he lets all go with the flow. aaarrg! I know that if they change sth then they wouldn't know what's gonna happen.
Anyway, I do like your story. Keep on updating
| sharNZ chapter 24 . 6/4/2011
ooh, I love H and S beeing together. Would love some more of that!
| a.little.whimsy chapter 23 . 6/4/2011
Love the story! I like the different aspect of the time-travel thing. Dumbledore kinda sucks though! Update soon:)
| tahtiiawnuhFF chapter 23 . 6/1/2011
awwwww so cute. yay. i loved this chappy. :]
| crazyelf22 chapter 23 . 6/1/2011
Ahh! Very interesting last few chapters. I'm really curious about the repercussions that Harry and Hermione's chat may have. I can't imagine it being the cause of anything TOO significant, but you never know...(well, YOU do). I'm quite excited to see what's next! :D
| katemary77 chapter 22 . 5/30/2011
I love the idea of this story, it's such an interesting take on the time travel idea. I wish there were more fanfics out their like yours!
| WeatherWatch chapter 22 . 5/30/2011
Snape's story is so damn bloody tragic! He's a bastard, sure, but gosh he sacrificed a lot for a whole crew of people that didn't care one whit for him - not to mention the lost-love-of-his-life.
I kind of want Hermione to befriend him/know that it wasn't his fault - Dumbles asked him to do it! And I completely forgot about the guarding of the DoM (that's where Arthur was injured - *lightbulb!*). Nice inclusion.
The last two lines really caught Molly and her relationship with all the characters in Harry Potter... I love her.
Wonderful update :D
| Lulu14168 chapter 22 . 5/30/2011
The only complaint I have is I'm always left wanting more...
| leafhouse chapter 22 . 5/30/2011
I'm getting more and more anxious as this story gets closer to Sirius' death; I can't wait to see what you do with that! Great characterization in this chapter. Also, I love how Hermione and Molly Weasley are reunited; Hermione could really use someone to comfort her during this especially trying time. Great chapter as usual :)
| Jocasta Silver chapter 21 . 5/29/2011
| WeatherWatch chapter 21 . 5/28/2011
Aha - the piano is such a stoogy kind of thing. I love the idea of Walburga choosing that method (of course, that said, what an awful way to go for any muggles/muggleborns entering the house!).
I watched The Lion King today, and I realised that my Kingsley sounds like Mufasa. That's irrelevant to you, but his appearance here reminded me of it again. He is so great. I like the easy conversations - few words, lots of meaning. And Dumbledore in this chapter was kind of great too. He was more like the Dumbledore I venerate.
| Jessica682 chapter 21 . 5/28/2011
| ThunderSpeak chapter 20 . 5/27/2011
oh wow that was heavy. I understand sirius' and hermione's frustration, and I feel bad for them. poor cedric, I really hoped he wouldn't die although I know you're not deviating from the plotline, just writing a subplot? haha w/e its called. thanks for the great chapter
| LeeshiLou chapter 20 . 5/26/2011
Really enjoying this, I hope the impending chapters aren't going to be too sad! :)
| WeatherWatch chapter 20 . 5/26/2011
But... but... but... CEDRIC! Q_Q I'm too sad to say much else *sob* Poor Cedric. I feel like I need to immortalise him in a fic now...
Why is life so cruel to Hermione? ('the world isn't that fair' - love that quote); and Sirius and Remus are wonderful - they balance each other out a bit, I find :)
Great writing, heartbreaking content. D: Keep up the amazing work.