|Reviews for Before the Dawn|
| Elliesmeow chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
Another wonderful chapter! I liked Hermione's brief conversation with Kingsley. Can't wait to watch everything unfold.:)
| ThunderSpeak chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
wow I love the ending. this was another great chapter. I like Kinglsey, and how Sirius was literally right beneath his nose lol. Great job.
| Dreams of Starlight chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
LOOVE it! :)
Poor Sirius and Hermione though.
| WeatherWatch chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
I was going to ask whether this was connected to Paradox, but I'm glad you're keeping them separate. It's quite heartbreaking.
Loving this so far, however, and I'm intrigued to see how you'll change things. Obviously the fact that Hermione is older is a clear difference. I take it she's waiting to catch up time? Which means that there are two Hermiones running around?
| WeatherWatch chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
This snuck up on me! I'mn so glad to see another multichapter from you - they're always wonderful, in my opinion :) I love the way you write time travel.
Hermione and Sirius are both perfectly characterised so far - I like the forethought with the knife, and how you've mentioned little details.
I look forward to the next chapters with more than a little impatience ;D
| Qualia Des chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
This is a fantastic beginning thus far, and I can't wait to see where you go next with this. :) Glad to see you writing another story by the way!
| Elliesmeow chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
Yay, another chapter! Thanks for posting. I'm glad these two are at least talking a bit about the things that have upset them.
Looking forward to more.:)
| ThunderSpeak chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
once again, wonderful. I can just feel the tense atmosphere in this chapter between them. you're so gritty and precise with your wording. thanks for a beautiful chapter
| AvidReaderBz chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
This is really really amazing! I love the way its written, and the short chapters work well for it.
So, despite Hermione knowing everything, nothing will change? And...Peter? PETER? I don't have a clue why he's there, but I can't wait to find out!
| leafhouse chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
Their emotions are really tangible in this chapter, very deftly written. Really can't wait for the next chapter.
| Azure-x-Roze chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
I love how their characters are portrayed and how different it was before is shown but it's subtle. :) When she says 'it won't last long' does she mean he'll be off to find Pettigrew or that he'll die in the DOM? When exactly does Hermione travel in time? Anyway, can't wait for the next update! :D
| LeeshiLou chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
You've piqued my interest! Will it tell the story about how they met, or will it continue on from this point? Update soon! :D
| Written Fire chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
I've never read a Sirius/Hermione before. Honestly, didn't even think it'd be something that would be shipped.
Should've known better.
I hope it's more than a one-shot. :)
| leafhouse chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Wow, I really loved this! I can't wait to see where you're going to go with it and what the back story is. Great attention catching first chapter :)
| laura chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
this is sad, but very sweet. I like their relationship. thanks for the very beautiful first chapter, I look forward to more.