|Reviews for No Way!|
| hmh chapter 7 . 2/4
Well, that was a nice read! Thanks!
| jun pyo chapter 7 . 12/10/2014
thanks! this makes more sense!
he really like that kiss of mikoto!
| candybear24 chapter 7 . 8/16/2014
This was THE most cutest thing I have ever read that didn't involve focusing a lot on the fight and I really loved it. This was absolutely written with feeling of MOE inside and I still feel it even up until now.
| Cheeseball no plural chapter 7 . 7/26/2014
Personslly, slightly too extreme as the first(the kiss) . Umm I think touma was ooc but thats to be expected
| Cheeseball no plural chapter 5 . 7/26/2014
I like this pair but I think any time touma likes somebody his character would be kinda off which is ok for me.
| ChaosGamer chapter 7 . 6/14/2014
I'll say it - its a very well written story!
| gunnerxxx chapter 7 . 2/23/2014
That was a nice short story :)
| Draconic chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Not enough typos to make me close it, but enough for me to notice.
Don't use Japanese kanji either. It drives readers that don't understand it away, and also comes across as a way of saying you're superior because you know Japanese. Don't get me wrong though, I'm not accusing you of feeling that way. In any case, "fukou da" should be either "such misfortune" or "just my luck." Similarly "Biri-Biri" doesn't make sense to people who don't know that the name sounds like crackling electricity as heard by a person who primarily speaks Japanese. In fanfiction, "zapper" is more effective.
| Wolkenritter Vita-chan chapter 2 . 9/23/2013
Decent! I actually find a decent story! Not bad.
| Peiji-chan chapter 7 . 9/14/2013
Misaka and Touma were portrayed very well. Although I think this could have gone for longer. You could have written about how the love grows and not just realisation. Misaka would definitely act like that and Touma would absolutely act that way. He always seems to be in control like that. Thank you for writing this fanfic. I hope to see more as I love this pairing so much. Don't be afraid to make it more graphic as long as there is a good story before it starts getting graphic then its ok. Nothing worse than reading a story that just gets straight into it then making it OOC
| Jedias Gloshma chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
It was a work of art. Too bad it's over.
| Jedias Gloshma chapter 6 . 9/2/2013
Something's happening and I'm pretty sure I'm going to like it.
| Jedias Gloshma chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
Description on the race was about the minimum you could give. We didn't know how long it is or what the ground was like until they tripped. Take that out and it was a good chapter.
| Jedias Gloshma chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Gyo gyo gyo. I've got nothing to say.
| Jedias Gloshma chapter 3 . 9/2/2013
Well the battle seemed way under powered but that's not the main point so I guess that's alright but what in grapes creation made you put the "challenges" in there.