Reviews for Pervading Potter
yet again chapter 39 . 6/22
ali the Gryffindor chapter 39 . 5/23
oh my frigging freaking beejesus babies I frigging loved this story so much and ah I think i'm in love with Alyssa and fred even though i've never actually met them I just loved your story so much just agh I cant even express my love for it. I loved everything about it but I was kind of mentally correcting a few spelling mistakes while reading so sorry if I come across as condescending but I think if I was you I would go back and correct a few mistakes but I still think this is like my fav story of all time . loved it hope your writing ,if you still are goes as well with your other stories ,sincerely alissa
Lexi Evans908 chapter 39 . 5/19
Amazing story and extremely happy with the six you didn't kill off (Dobby, Hedwig, Fred, Sirius, Remus & Tonks) because to be honest, they are some of my fav characters and I don't see why they were killed off in the first place.
littlelapwing chapter 39 . 3/11
I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS! It is hilarious! Although it did keep me up until 4am on a school night :/ please post a sequel! I need some fluff! :D
WinchesterNimrod chapter 8 . 2/8
Oh i cried at that last bit. SO MANY FEELS AT 1am!
Hyperion chapter 2 . 1/15
So far I don't find Alyssa appealing. I don't see why she had to lie. There's nothing stopping Dumbledore or Snape from reading her mind. Or they could use a truth serum if they wanted to. But really, I find it ridiculous that they believe she's telling the truth after the way she was acting previously.

Checking for cameras, touching Dumbledore's beard, checking the glass of water for strings, etc. For someone that's supposedly a witch...they wouldn't have reacted like a muggle would have. Besides, if they do believe her lie, there's nothing to stop them from checking out her story to see if it's true. They would have contact the Salem school to get her records and stuff. They would have found out she doesn't exist. Even in the Ministry they wouldn't have a record of her transferring/moving to England from America. There's a lot of plot holes with her lies and I do hope they're dealt with at some point.
Longlostweasleycousin chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Literally my favourite fic xxx
Guest chapter 39 . 11/20/2014
Omg, wow, I loved it!
emmamaysie chapter 30 . 8/18/2014
Haha - Draco & Neville priceless
SwanlovesFredW chapter 39 . 8/12/2014
Hey! I've read this over and over again and im still waiting for the epilogue. What happened? I really love the story and cried a lot with it. You know with the brake up and when you think serious is dead. I also laugh a lot. Ally is hilarious! Love it! I would be really happy with an epilogue!
Traptedinconfusion chapter 39 . 7/24/2014
Ok so I just wanted to tell you that I love this story... This is by far the best I have read so far. It was really easy for me to read and understand, Also I didn't think I was really going to like this because I hate the whole time travel thing, But I fell in love with Alyssa as she when through her journey. Thank you for posting this, it is amazing.
Slutmonkey Radishballs chapter 36 . 5/22/2014
Seriously, I put up with 36 chapter of you using the word "borrowed" instead of "loaned," "Dobbie" instead of "Dobby," "cruxio" instead of "crucio," not to mention dozens of other annoyances, and you kill her husband? What, you're going to bring him back with some kind of deus ex machina? Sigh. Edit this please. I'm guessing the reason you don't have more reviews is from the errors I listed above. For anyone else who checks reviews before reading, the plot on this is pretty amazing if you can deal with those kinds of errors sprinkled throughout.
mrsdansmith chapter 39 . 4/18/2014
wow... just read this story in a day and it was brilliant. I love Allys character, i think you wrote her really well as she is different to other people's OCs. i absolutely loved her and fred, they were soooo amazing together and you actually broke my heart when he died, i was like "WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK. YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO ME. YOU CAN'T." yeah, excuse my language i was very upset, but then he was alive and omg i was so happy. i loved sirius of course, and tonks and ginny, and i actually really liked harry in this, i think you wrote him well. anyway, yeah, brilliant fic. that's all i can say :)

p.s. when i was looking through the chapter names (cos i was sooo impatient for fred and ally to get together) i saw the chapter called New Romantic and i was like 'ooh i like that song' and then you actually quoted it in the chapter and i was really happy.
Lissi45829 chapter 39 . 1/26/2014
Well first of all, I hate this story! And do you know why? Because it is now 4:30 in the morning on a monday and I SHOULD sleep but I couldn't quite reading your story. You wrote it so good that I just had to keep on and on. I will probably find another awesome fanfiction, which results to reading the whole night.
Secondly, I love this bloody story. How you wrote them and thought about is just amazing. I mean how you put some passages from the book in and that they weren't lovey dovey at the beginning. I also had to cry, stiffle my laughter and groan in pain because I could feel what they were feeling.
Thirdly, I loved how you wrote the charakters. That Sirius was a big role in this fic? I LOVE it! It was great how you descriebed him when they had to leave and after he got free. There was really a change and I liked that a lot. And all the otheres where authentic too! The Weasleys, Tonks!, Remus... And I think you broke my heart when they broke up. And have me laughing the whole time during the wedding ceremonie.
So, all in all:
I don't have many fics I really like but this one was awesome. It had its faults but I like that. You put a real thought behind it, connected persons and put an SUPER-DUPER-AWESOME other charakter in. I just loved Alyssa! So I think this is a long review and that you keep up the awesome work. (I know lots of awesomes' but I can't help it, it is just AWESOME :D)
Autumn rain8 chapter 39 . 1/26/2014
hey just wanted to say this was one of the first story's I read on fan fiction and I loved it then and I still love it now. I didn't review when I first read it so I thought I might as well do it now I've re read it (sorry I didn't see the note at the end till just now)
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