Reviews for Pervading Potter
Selenas chapter 16 . 7/6
Slight note, Dementors were gone from Azkaban at the end of book 5, they deserted to join Voldemort with the breakout
Divergentprincess chapter 26 . 5/5
When I first found this fanfic I loved it and read it many times. I even recommended it to some friends, but, sadly, I never reviewed. Today I felt the urge to read this story once again and I still loved it. I mean, sure it has some mistakes, but that didn't make me love it less than the first time I read it. Anyways, great story and I'm still totally looking foward to the epilogue :'( :).
Lavendor Queen chapter 39 . 4/9
I just read this for the first time and now I want to read a chapter on the Weasley family POV of when the found out about the threats Ally had and why she broke up with Fred. I wanna read how they all felt... But it was a good story in total really, I loved every minute of it.
sarah.clarence.1 chapter 14 . 3/3
the damsel in distress chapter isn't loading
misherukuro chapter 39 . 12/21/2015
A very well written fic thanks for sharing it was a great read. ~,~
Sortinghat chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
It saaddens me that this generation is so braindead they judge the quality of entertainment based on favorite characters then actual quality control. I shudder when they grow up to be book critics which will make reviews worthless. As the saying goes. Garbage in Garbage out.
Guest chapter 39 . 9/20/2015
I really liked this story, nice that the twins including Fred got attention. Thank you so much!
Guest chapter 39 . 9/14/2015
oh my god, ok when you still killed off fred I was ready to scream bloody murder! but then I was like, "no you need to finish this and see what happens, the author cant be that cruel right?!" and im sooooo glad I did!
ps. the pirates of the Caribbean seen was perfect!
yet again chapter 39 . 6/22/2015
ali the Gryffindor chapter 39 . 5/23/2015
oh my frigging freaking beejesus babies I frigging loved this story so much and ah I think i'm in love with Alyssa and fred even though i've never actually met them I just loved your story so much just agh I cant even express my love for it. I loved everything about it but I was kind of mentally correcting a few spelling mistakes while reading so sorry if I come across as condescending but I think if I was you I would go back and correct a few mistakes but I still think this is like my fav story of all time . loved it hope your writing ,if you still are goes as well with your other stories ,sincerely alissa
The-Archer-Princess chapter 39 . 5/19/2015
Amazing story and extremely happy with the six you didn't kill off (Dobby, Hedwig, Fred, Sirius, Remus & Tonks) because to be honest, they are some of my fav characters and I don't see why they were killed off in the first place.
littlelapwing chapter 39 . 3/11/2015
I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS! It is hilarious! Although it did keep me up until 4am on a school night :/ please post a sequel! I need some fluff! :D
WinchesterNimrod chapter 8 . 2/8/2015
Oh i cried at that last bit. SO MANY FEELS AT 1am!
Hyperion chapter 2 . 1/15/2015
So far I don't find Alyssa appealing. I don't see why she had to lie. There's nothing stopping Dumbledore or Snape from reading her mind. Or they could use a truth serum if they wanted to. But really, I find it ridiculous that they believe she's telling the truth after the way she was acting previously.

Checking for cameras, touching Dumbledore's beard, checking the glass of water for strings, etc. For someone that's supposedly a witch...they wouldn't have reacted like a muggle would have. Besides, if they do believe her lie, there's nothing to stop them from checking out her story to see if it's true. They would have contact the Salem school to get her records and stuff. They would have found out she doesn't exist. Even in the Ministry they wouldn't have a record of her transferring/moving to England from America. There's a lot of plot holes with her lies and I do hope they're dealt with at some point.
Longlostweasleycousin chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Literally my favourite fic xxx
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