Reviews for Never Fail
laloga chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Fantastic! This was very gripping; you did a wonderful job getting inside Rex's head and illustrating the conflict that he would most certainly feel when the order is given. His train of thought flows very naturally and leads him to (imo) the right conclusion. I loved the flashbacks within the story as well, they provided some nice background.

Also, LOVE the name "Cull" for a trooper, especially in this instance.

Great job!
shakespeareaddict chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Yes! I was waiting for you to write an Order 66 fic! And a mild Rexoka, at that-let's just say I'm very pleased.

Mild syntax note-in the beginning you use a lot of those lines things. You might want to be careful with those, too many makes it look sloppy and they are sometimes unneccessary, especially if they're as short as some of your blurbs are.
AL0LT0 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
amazingly moving well done. 3
Bluesaber3 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
I like this :) I sure hope if Ahsoka does survive until oder 66, rex would stand up for her like he does here :)
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