Looking good :) Personally i like Jay/JayBird better than Rain but meh, your choice. :) Next chapter soon please?

Dudeeeeeeee too short. b longer story :)

I really liked this. I hope u continue with it:)

Holy fuck-tard I fucking love it. Sorry for swearing but I swear when I read amazing stories! How you wrote is so descriptive and great fking flow to it. It blends very well! Sad it's only one chapter but it's fucking good still. Update soon dude, it seriously needs to continue.

I love this book! I am soooo happy you are doing it

woo hoo! slut's gonna get her ass kicked